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Kazei Hitari
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:59 am


This is where you come to get your characters approved. Just place the link to your profile with the character name in it or you can just place the character profile up also. We also understand some of you may want to make changes to your profile, but realize that you will have to send the character through the application thread to get approved again.  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:45 pm



Reaper Elyse

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Baron Blank

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:41 pm


PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:59 pm


Approved

Master Torsin- The only thing you won't be able to have in your profile is the technique called "Nothing". You won't be able to just 'anything'. No technique is infinite an unending. Other than that, your profile looks good.

Pending

Reaper Elyse-I'm going to have to deny this one. I know she's a Taboo Swordsman but but the void ability is overpowered, it's toying with the foundations that make up the very fold of the universe itself to the point where it isn't even magic anymore. Time and Space techniques are pretty munch the top tier elements of any rp, which is why they are very very limited in a single character even in anime/manga.

The gates need to be toned down as well. They could use more innovation and direction, especially in the fire department. Inspiration is good, but it seems you're pulling too munch from another profile of a character in this guild which can be pointed out with the close references you are making in the description. Also as I read deeper into your profile, the gates seem like shortcuts to have mastery over all the elements without going through the trouble. It's one thing to use all of the elements in different techniques and spells, but it's another thing to have full mastery over each one.

Reon9
Vice Captain


Tsumuro

PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:00 pm


PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:29 pm


Approved

Tsumuro-Give a bit more detail as to what Zirin Magic is. Other than that you're looking good.

Reon9
Vice Captain


Tsumuro

PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:39 pm


Noted
PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 10:59 am



Kazei Hitari
Captain


Orichisama
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 11:02 am


PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 11:29 am



Calibur Elyos


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:02 pm


Reon9
Approved

Master Torsin- The only thing you won't be able to have in your profile is the technique called "Nothing". You won't be able to just 'anything'. No technique is infinite an unending. Other than that, your profile looks good.


What if I make the amount I can use limited then can is it all right.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:03 pm


Yes if you specify the things he is exactly creating.

Reon9
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Prince_yureil

Liberal Lunatic

PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:46 pm


PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:49 pm


I have edited it so its all good now.

Baron Blank

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 6:56 pm


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