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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:02 pm
Slit my throat
Drench yourself in my pain
Show me that you care enough
To end this ******** up game
Tears form in my eyes
As regret shows in yours
You couldn't see the real me
'Cause you were too busy with your whores
All I wanted was for you to love me
For you to care as much as me
But instead you went for someone else
And didn't listen to my silent pleas
You finally realize how much I love you
But now it's far too late
So stop pretending like you cared
And give me my sweet escape
Slit my throat
Drench yourself in my pain
Show me that you care enough
To end this ******** up game
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 3:37 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:56 pm
Love it. It's a great poem,and I like the darkness of it. I write poetry of the dark also.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:50 pm
Thank you for reading it and for your compliments.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 8:13 pm
No problem. Do you have other work in your journal?
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:11 pm
Yes, but they're not very good. I have one here that I wrote recently: Rough Deceit
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 7:26 am
sorry about whoever did this to you, but at least something good came of it wink (your poem)
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:28 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:36 pm
Yeah, the guy was/is a complete a**, but he was my best friend and I still love him, even if he hates me. But, I'm actually proud of this poem and suppose some credit has to go to him for doing this to me and making it possible for me to write this.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:03 am
wow, do you ever write happy stuff? it's ok if you don't, your depressing stuff is amazing, i was just wondering.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:16 am
No, because I mainly write when I'm depressed, therefore my poetry turns out...depressing.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:19 am
that's pretty much what happens to me too. when i'm happy there's nothing to write about, i write to get rid of bad feelings
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:31 am
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