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Rough Deceit

It's your fault I'm broken, it's your fault I cry

Why can't you go away and just let me die?

Leave me in peace, god let me rest

I just want to get rid of this weight on my chest



The blade that you're holding is at my throat

Slit it, then you can run off and gloat

About what you've done and the death of my heart

How you took it in your hands and tore it apart.



I loved you and how did you pay me back in return?

By setting my life ablaze and watching me burn.

I poured my heart out to only you

What more was it that you wanted me to do?



Did you want me to leave you to your fun?

Would you have liked me better if I had just run

Away from you and all that you were

I wouldn't have loved you, that's for sure.



But I didn't and I do

Even after what you put me through.

I don't hate you, I never will

I just wish things had been different, still

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Slit My Throat

Slit my throat

Drench yourself in my pain

Show me that you care enough

To end this ******** up game



Tears form in my eyes

As regret shows in yours

You couldn't see the real me

'Cause you were too busy with your whores



All I wanted was for you to love me

For you to care as much as me

But instead you went for someone else

And didn't listen to my silent pleas



You finally realize how much I love you

But now it's far too late

So stop pretending like you cared

And give me my sweet escape



Slit my throat

Drench yourself in my pain

Show me that you care enough

To end this ******** up game

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I just want to know what people think about them. Please don't judge them on the fact that they're suicidal, I know that they are. I just want honest opinions.

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Hmm, this poem is deep and as you said dark. I definitly like it. mrgreen

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Thank you!

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lol. nice.
here's one of mine.


PUPPET:


The master makes a command
I do not understand
But he pulls me by my strings
Oh, the memories this play will bring

Dancing for you
This performence is not true
How I wish to be a child once more
So I can explore

So I can feel
And in I shall reel
The smells and touches of each day
But I cannot, for this is the price I must pay.

I wanted to be a real marionette. I got my wish.

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I like it!

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Did you mean 'deceit'?

...in my honest opinion, they made me want to throw up. I don't know when I developed such an adverse reaction to suicide poetry that's not even exceptionally horrible, but it can't be that bad for me to see that way, meh?

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No, it's understandable, some people really can't stand it...
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