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 Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 4:28 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 9:53 pm
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... The gray tom followed his mentor with excitement in his paws. She had to remind him several times to be quiet and not run ahead of her. But Smokepaw just couldn't help himself! There were trees all around them know and so many of them looked like he could easily climb to the closest branch. While Spottedpath was still walking he ran over to one of the trees and stood on his hind legs, his front paws resting on the trunk. His head looked upwards as he searched for an easy way up. He noticed that there were plenty of places to place his claws. With a devious smirk he began to climb upwards. He didn't stop till he was on the sixth branch upwards. His pelt blended in with the shadow of the leaves and he crouched low to the branch. He was well hidden at the moment and he waited in silence for his mentor to notice he was no longer following her. His muscles were aching though from keeping still. His tail ached to twitch but he was determined to show his mentor that he could stay hidden if he put his mind to it. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2013 7:59 pm
Spottedpath kept walking, unaware that her apprentice had left her side. Actually, that was a lie. She knew he had gone, but kept moving to see if she could find him following after her. If he didn't follow, she would loop around back to the camp and leave him there. Because, her pelt would quickly hide her if he got to far away. She would either come back in the morning, or see if he came back in time, which ever one came first. So, she just padded along, pretending to be unaware of her apprentice, keeping a brisk pace, purposefully making it hard for him to keep up. She smirked to herself, this was going to be fun...
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Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2013 5:40 pm
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... He lingered in his hiding spot, peering at his mentor through the branches. Either she didn't notice his disappearance or was ignoring it. Either way he was glad she wasn't turning around to scold him. A bird chirping above his head caused him to look upward. His eyes had to dart between the branches to find it.
There it was, seven, maybe eight branches above him. It was a plump sparrow singing it's song to the forest the cats called their home. It hadn't noticed him yet. Moving ever slowly he began to make his way upward, stopping every once in a while to make sure not to make a single sound or give himself away. Instead of going to the branch the bird was on he went to the branch above it. Wasting no time he lunged downward. The bird let out a startled cry as it tried to fly off. Instead it found itself flying directly into SMokepaw's claws. He slammed it back onto the branch and gave it's neck a killing bite. The bird's body went limp and he felt pride surge beneath his pelt. But he had made one mistake, he hadn't checked the branch the bird had been perched on. Behind him he head a sickening crack that cause a shiver of fear to run down his spine. His ears went flat against his head as he slowly turned his head to look behind him. He could hear more cracks. He braly had enough time to get the bird into his mouth before he felt himself falling. His paws flailed outward as he tried to grab onto a branch. It seemed luck was on his side. Just before he hit the ground he managed to grab the lowest branch. The one that had broken was on the ground below him and he was hanging there with his prize still dangling in his mouth and his back paws dangling in the air. Realizing he was safe, his body a little bruised from hitting some of the branches on the way down, but he was fine. He let a sigh of relief, not realizing he had been holding his breath. With a little difficulty he managed to get his back paws safely onto the branch he had been clinging to. Doing some quick gauging downwards he jumped out of the tree and nearly fell over. Still he held his head up high and though his sparrow had been a little battered in the fall as well. To him it seemed like the best prize he had gotten since his first catch when he had been but a little kit still in the nursery. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2013 6:00 pm
Spottedpath, had stopped a while away from the tree, and even though she told herself that she would leave. She couldn't, and came back and watched. She wasn't going to help him, even if he had fallen. If he didn't listen to her, then she shouldn't bother helping him. She hoped he had learned not to disobey her and wander off. She quietly padded over to him. Her tail swayed and flicked angrily. She spoke in the most cold and upset tone possible, "I told you, Smokepaw. We don't have time for breaks." Her bright green eyes scorching his fur. She was going to make a warrior, not a full-grown kit. She was glad he wasn't hurt, that bad, all the same.
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Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2013 7:58 pm
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... The young tom glared defiantly up at his mentor and though his mouth was full he gave her a sarcastic response "Really, I had no clue. I always take my breaks by falling out of trees." angry that he had been scolded he spat out his prey at her paws and walked around her. "Next time you stop to hunt for prey I be glad to remind you that we don't have time to take breaks." he called over his shoulders. Though he was still proud of his catch and would come and fetch it later, right now he just wanted to be able to get as far away from his mentor as possible. But sadly the chances of that being allowed to happen were very slim. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2013 4:17 pm
Spottedpath growled in response, "Fine Smokepaw." she made sure he heard the -paw. "I'll tell Sunstar you are not mature enough to be a warrior yet." her green eyes blazing with anger at the apprentice. She stalked away, and said nothing more to the snotty apprentice. Today was his assessment, and he failed. Being a warrior required more than hunting and fighting skills, and he had yet to comprehend that. He didn't listen to her orders, and when she called him out on it, he argued, then badmouthed her. He wasn't ready. She soundlessly padded back to the camp, leaving the apprentice behind, and all alone. ((Spottedpath in camp))
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Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2013 6:08 pm
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... He felt the anger rise when it seemed she felt the annoying need to point out that he was indeed still a 'paw' His claws slid out as he turned and fixed her with a glare. His jaw tightened as he fought back a nasty reply, yet his look said it all. He was bigger, faster, stronger, and could do all his task perfectly. If she continued to fail him in his assessments she was going to have him as an enemy for the rest of her life. He broke his look when her back was turned toward him and she was stalking away. His tail tip twitched and a growl rumbled deep in his throat. If this kept up he wasn't going to be able to be a warrior when his sisters got their warrior name. Angrily he stalked off in no direction in particular. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 8:36 pm
>Spottedpath<
She lead him to the place she had brought him earlier. She just mewed, "do what you want. I'll be over that way if you need anything." Her tail motioned in the direction she was speaking of. She waited just a heartbeat more until she headed to the brush in that direction. She hoped nothing would go wrong, the air felt heavy and she hoped that a hungry fox or badger wouldn't stumble by. She caught a squirrel, a mouse, and two frogs. Something was wrong. She wanted to check on her apprentice, but he would just shrug her off.
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Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2013 1:06 am
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... In silence he followed behind his mentor, the only sound that passed between the two cats was the sound of paw steps on the ground. She led them back to where their fight this morning had began. He barely heard her speak before he ran ahead and began with a determination that he only showed when he was training with his sister's mentors. In no time he managed to catch two squirrels, three mice, and a vole. Like he normally did when he hunted he had hid each of his prey at the base of a tree. With the vole still in his mouth, carried by the tail, a chill came over him that caused him to freeze in his tracks. He couldn't explain why but something felt wrong. His ears strained for a sound but the strange thing was...there was none. Even the bird had gone silent and suddenly there was no prey to be found. His fur was puffed up with fear as he looked above and around him for any sign of danger. But as hard as he tried he could find no visibly signs. He was half tempted to run and find Spottedpath, in fact he took a few steps in the direction she had gone in. But then he paused No, a warrior doesn't run to the safety of a grown cat. Come on Smokepaw your not a kit anymore, by tomorrow you'll be a warrior. he stubbornly reminded himself. With his ears flattened against his skull he took careful steps, keeping silent so as to not disturb the silence around him, toward the base of the tree where his prey was hidden beneath some of the fallen leaves. He gently placed the vole on top of the pile when the sound of some leaves rustling in the distance caused him to whirl around with a wide eyed look. The wind was blowing toward whatever it was so he couldn't tell what it was by the scent alone, but by the sound of the movement he knew it was much larger then himself. Taking a gulp he yelled for Spottedpath "Uh....hey deputy get your tail over here." not once did he tear his gaze away from the moving....well whatever it was. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2013 9:24 pm
>Spottedpath<
She let out a gasp. She was right! The she-cat wasted no time and rushed to her apprentice. She mewed quietly, "what is-" She was stopped by seeing something rustling the brush. She growled to her apprentice, "get in the tree, now, Smokepaw. We don't have time to argue." The deputy let her claws slid out. She had seen one of these once before. They had to be handled carefully. She wouldn't let her apprentice get hurt or die, even if it meant that she had too. He had too much to live for. She let out a snarl and slashed it's side. It's blood started to cover her claws as she desperately tried to defend herself and keep her apprentice safe. She hoped she wouldn't die, but she still mewed to her apprentice, "if I die, Smokepaw, then, tell the clan what happened. Even if I die at the claws of this creature, still become a warrior. Do it for you, Smokepaw. I'm sorry-" The creature swung it's paw and knocked over the warrior. It then stumbled away, leaving the warrior with short shallow breaths. She hardly was able to call down her apprentice. "I'm so sorry, Smokepaw. I failed you and my clan." She let out a sad laugh. She had a small chance of surviving. She desperately tried to hold on to life. She couldn't leave now. She closed her eyes and mewed though short gasps "Hurry. Get help. Please. Smokepaw" Her eyes were pleading.
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Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2013 12:37 am
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... His head twisted when he heard Spottedpath approaching, pointing toward the creature that had yet to come into view. Even with the panic from fear rising inside him he was still calm enough to notice her rising panic. When she told him to climb up into the tree he had to bite back an argument, common sense taking over at the moment. With ease he climbed up to the first branch and watched as his mentor fought the creature. Perched on the branch where he was safe, he had a perfect view of what was going on below him. In the midst of battle she spoke words he thought would never come from her, if anything it shocked him a little and left him a little wide eyed. She actually wants me to become a warrior? his gaze kept to his mentor, watching her in battle. But once it was over his mentor lay on the ground looking to be in pretty bad shape. As soon as the creature was out of sight Smokepaw jumped down to the ground and rushed over to his mentor, sniffing curiously at her wounds. Anger ignited in his gaze as he turned his head in the direction the creature had gone. He was tempted to go after the creature....But as much as he hated it Spottedpath needed him right now. "No Spottedpath, you haven't failed and you will still live to serve your clan." he promised her with a determination that caused a wave of power to run through his body. Clenching his jaw he rushed away, heading in the direction of the camp. He ran through the territory with a sense of ease, not even slowing down when he had the camp entrance in sight. He rushed through and shouted "Spottedpath was injuried, she desperately needs help!" many of the cats turned their heads with looks of confusion and terror but no one seemed to respond....well except Demonshadow who was now on his paws demanding to know what had happened. But Smokepaw ignored his demands and looked to find the medicine cat, or leader, some cat to be of help to him and not fret over the she-cat as if their head had been cut off. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2013 12:54 am
Sasabe_Luner Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... His head twisted when he heard Spottedpath approaching, pointing toward the creature that had yet to come into view. Even with the panic from fear rising inside him he was still calm enough to notice her rising panic. When she told him to climb up into the tree he had to bite back an argument, common sense taking over at the moment. With ease he climbed up to the first branch and watched as his mentor fought the creature. Perched on the branch where he was safe, he had a perfect view of what was going on below him. In the midst of battle she spoke words he thought would never come from her, if anything it shocked him a little and left him a little wide eyed. She actually wants me to become a warrior? his gaze kept to his mentor, watching her in battle. But once it was over his mentor lay on the ground looking to be in pretty bad shape. As soon as the creature was out of sight Smokepaw jumped down to the ground and rushed over to his mentor, sniffing curiously at her wounds. Anger ignited in his gaze as he turned his head in the direction the creature had gone. He was tempted to go after the creature....But as much as he hated it Spottedpath needed him right now. "No Spottedpath, you haven't failed and you will still live to serve your clan." he promised her with a determination that caused a wave of power to run through his body. Clenching his jaw he rushed away, heading in the direction of the camp. He ran through the territory with a sense of ease, not even slowing down when he had the camp entrance in sight. He rushed through and shouted "Spottedpath was injuried, she desperately needs help!" many of the cats turned their heads with looks of confusion and terror but no one seemed to respond....well except Demonshadow who was now on his paws demanding to know what had happened. But Smokepaw ignored his demands and looked to find the medicine cat, or leader, some cat to be of help to him and not fret over the she-cat as if their head had been cut off. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can. ((OOC: Oh no! There is no medicine cat yet! eek What are we going to do?!?!))
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Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2013 12:32 am
((I realized that too...A bit of a perdicament. Hmmm what to do, what to do.))
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Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2013 5:41 pm
Sasabe_Luner ((I realized that too...A bit of a perdicament. Hmmm what to do, what to do.)) ((I'll make a cat in a bit. 3nodding ))
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