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Karuda Gensou Uchiha Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 1:57 am
OMG OMG, We're launching? Yes! Chapter one: A basic introduction to a few of the main characters and the start of the main part of the story, yes I know it's short but it is pilot, its supposed to be...Chapter two: Yes, another shamefully short introduction chapter, this chapter sets the grounds for later chapters to unfold as well as giving us a tiny sneak peek into the mysterious leader's thoughts and motives.Discussion Thread, you say?
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 2:01 am
Chapter one:
The ten stood in utter silence, the cavern they were situated in echoed even the slightest sound. Nine stood around the one in silent expectance, they were all summoned by the one after all. The one raised its hand, which was covered by a black sleeve,
“Fate has brought you all here today, before a god, for a reason” The one spoke “You all have had a taste of the bitter medicine that is the truth of the shinobi villages and all seek revenge and together, we, can bring the ultimate revenge... What say you, fingers of fate?”
Karuda crossed his arms and narrowed his eyes “You speak of fate bringing the ten of us here and yet you ask us if we want to join, each one of us could simply say no and depart right now, how is that fate?”
The others murmured in agreement, the one smiled very slightly under the hood that obscured it from view “The illusion of choice is just a formality of manners, I know you all join me... I am the god who will purge the impure world.”
Karuda gave it a scanning look before chuckling, “Someone is very confident,” he said with a certain venom in his voice, he reached into his cloak and pulled out a kunai. “Now what would happen if I stabbed you with this? Would you kill me? Would you die?”
“Try it and find out” the figure surrounded by the others said with a certain noticeable confidence. Karuda moved forward, aiming the kunai directly at his target’s heart when suddenly a sharpened metallic pole shot out from under the sleeve of the ninja, impaling Karuda.
“You think I’d walk right into that?” Karuda’s voice jeered as the impaled figure burst into smoke and he pressed his kunai at the ninja’s throat from behind.
The ninja’s hood fell down as she said “Impressive clone, even I couldn’t tell” and Karuda was thrown backwards into the wall of the cave.
“What? He wasn’t even touched!” shouted a Kunoichi, with completely white eyes. There were murmurs among the others.
“She means to kill us!” a ninja, wearing furs covered in blood, snarled viciously. He suddenly rushed forward with a wolf by his side, “Gatsūga!” he howled, launching into a spinning attack with the wolf.
“No!” shouted a ninja wearing a cloak with only one sleeve, forming handseals, he slammed his palm to the ground. “Mokuton: Jukai Heki” he shouted and several pillars of wood rose from the ground, weaving themselves into a wall.
The man and wolf slammed into the wall and stopped suddenly and the wall receded. The ninja looked among themselves with both awe and caution.
“Okay, so now we now that we all have something to be afraid of in each other” Karuda’s voice called out as he limped out of the darkness “but where is this going?”
The Kunoichi that had summoned them there spoke “Good to see you were able to get over that love-tap so easily” Karuda glared but didn’t interrupt “We are going to do what no other number of Shinobi could... We are going to destroy all the shinobi villages.”
A few of the gathered gave her dubious looks but Karuda laughed “I could do that on my own, it’s just too much of a bother and there is nothing in it for me” he said boastfully.
A ninja who had said nothing until that point tutted “A grand claim, even for an Uchiha” he said “Genjutsuist, you can’t bluff a sensor”
Many of the ninja fixed Karuda with a stare, the Uchiha had a lot of enemies.
“I tire of these theatrics” said the Kunoichi who had gathered them, holding out her hands and fanning her fingers. Each one of them had a ring on it.
Each of the gathered seemed to know exactly what they were supposed to do, as each of them walked toward her...
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Karuda Gensou Uchiha Vice Captain
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Karuda Gensou Uchiha Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 6:07 pm
Chapter two:
Each of the nine drew up to her in turn and took a ring from her fingers. Karuda limped over and took the ring on her right index finger “I see what you mean” he said, turning the ring around in his hands “about the hand of fate bringing us here”
The Kunoichi gave him a scanning look with her metallic eyes, “We are the hands of fate” she said to him.
All the ninja gathered seemed to be examining the rings, as if unsure whether it was safe to put them on, Karuda looked at them and chuckled slightly, sliding his own ring onto his finger.
The woman raised her arms for complete silence, “Rei, with the eyes of the Alpha shall bring about the Omega. Omoi, the cold calculating mind that ensnares all in its own reality. Hono’o, the heat that forged this world. Yakusou, the herbs that heal can also kill. Kita, the top-most axis on which the world spins. Mugen, the eyes that see all cannot be fooled. Karada, an indestructible body of pure steel to lead the advance. Ko’ori, the ice that freezes the world will join with the beginning. Kemono, the rabid animal instinct with which this world is bound. Minami, the south that dances eternally with the north.”
“We are the Ten Fingers of Fate” the mysterious woman said “Gathered to purge the impure world of the evil that is shinobi kind!”
“Kita and Minami will travel south, to Sunagakure and capture the Ichibi Jinchuuriki, on completing instructions you will be further briefed” The Kunoichi said, Karuda watched as the ninja who insulted him and one of the others paired up and left the cavern
“Yakusou, Kemono” The man who made the wall of wood and the man in furs paired up, clearly both were unhappy with the arrangement. “You two will hunt for rogue or travelling Jinchuuriki, go!” said their new leader and the two disappeared.
“Hono’o, Ko’ori you two are to go to Kirigakure and seek out the Sanbi Jinchuuriki” she said, as two very different looking ninja paired up a left.
“Omoi, Karada” she said, Karuda gave a small mock bow and waited for his partner. “Karada... Karada” she said before finally losing patience “Your with him” she said to Karuda, pointing to an massive hulk of a man who clearly didn’t have two brain-cells to rub together.
Karuda walked over to the man “Hey, were partner’s in this” he said, the giant man turned around “I Karada?” he asked. “Uh, Yes... You are” he said, trying with all his might not to insult the giant.
“You two are to travel to Kumogakure and seek the Nibi Jinchuuriki” she said “Avoid the Raikage at all costs, Omoi, he could be seriously bad news for you.” Karuda and the hulk disappeared.
“Well Mugen, you’re with me, Rei.” Rei said to the white eyed woman “You are to use your ocular abilities to research information on the high tailed Bijuu and Jinchuuriki for me, I’ll be keeping tabs on the others and instructing them.”
Mugen nodded and disappeared.
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