Hi all!
Well, we had quite a few entries, but only three of you cam up the the goods! Those of you were:
Our Final Destiny by jumbrello
Wearing your heart on your head by xSecond Setbackx
and
She loves me, she loves me not by x_Haunted-Fate_x!
Well, all of our crew have now voted, and here are the results!
Our Final DestinyBecki's Judging:Our Final Destiny:
Usage of words: 8
Originality: 8
Accessibility: 7
Join-ability: 6
Storyline: 7
Total: 36
Overall, I liked it, especially as you took a cluster I thought would be used for a Medieval Fantasy, and turned it into a Sci-Fi! However, some things seemed a little slapdash.
Zennarion's Judging:Our Final Destiny:
Usage of words: 7
Originality: 6
Accessibility: 4
Join-ability: 3
Storyline: 8
Total: 28
Leid's Judging:Usage of words: 5
Originality: 7
Accessibility: 9
Join-ability: 10
Storyline: 8
Total: 39
While clever in use none of the words really seem to apply to the roleplay directly. Overall a good idea, but needs a little something. Not sure what, though. The setting helps the plot and vise versa be more interesting.
Kacroth's Judging:Usage of words: 7
Originality: 6
Accessibility: 6
Join-ability: 5
Storyline: 8
Total: 32
Mad Hatters Revenge's Judging:Usage of words: 10
Originality: 9
Accessibility: 10
Joinability:9
Storyline: 10
Total: 48
Loved how the word cat was snuck in from the list! The storyline is good, but have seen a lot of 'the Earth is dead, now the humans are trying to get by' plots. There are only a few main characters that the plot will revolve around which may limit people joining as a made up side character.
Wearing your heart on your headBecki's Judging:Usage of words: 9
Originality: 10
Accessibility: 6
Join-ability: 8
Storyline: 10
Total: 43
I think you took the hardest cluster, and actually pulled something out of the bag that I thought really worked, and I would never have thought of! Your only problem would be the accessibility, as it is a bit of an odd thing for someone to fling themselves into as a concept.
Zennarion's Judging:Wearing your heart on your head:
Usage of words: 6
Originality: 8
Accessibility: 3
Join-ability: 2
Storyline: 5
Total: 24
Leid's Judging:Usage of words: 10
Originality: 10
Accessibility: 10
Join-ability: 10
Storyline: 10
Total: 50
This RP is really creative and I've never seen one likes this at all before. I think it has a lot of potential for many different things to happen.
Kacroth's Judging:Usage of words: 8
Originality: 9
Accessibility: 6
Join-ability: 5
Storyline: 7
Total: 35
Mad Hatters Revenge's Judging:Use of Words: 10
Originality: 10
Acessibility: 10
Joinability: 9
Storyline: 8
Total: 47
It may be hard to get many to join and keep it alive with a lot of the action taking place online without some sort of plot twist like someone trying to shut the site down or it being an experiment. Right now it's mostly just a character chat forum in my mind instead of a story that will catch attention.
She Loves Me, She Loves me NotBecki's Judging:Usage of words: 8
Originality: 6
Accessibility: 8
Join-ability: 8
Storyline: 6
Total: 36
This was good, and had the nice twist of the curses! However, this does make it very predictable and run of the mill will the arranged marriage scenario. But I can see where it would get its popularity.
Zennarion's Judging:Usage of words: 9
Originality: 7
Accessibility: 8
Join-ability: 4
Storyline: 6
Total: 34
Leid's Judging:Usage of words: 8
Originality: 8
Accessibility: 10
Join-ability: 4
Storyline: 8
Total: 38
The story line isn't overly complicated and left open for the players to customize their characters completely which is pretty great. It suffers point for join-ability because the way it appears is that there are few characters to be played, and only one of the listed ones are open, so it's like "why bother" if there is only 'one character to pick'. That's just the feel. Otherwise; great idea and execution!
Kacroth's Judging:Usage of words: 9
Originality: 9
Accessibility: 7
Join-ability: 6
Storyline: 5
Total: 36
Mad Hatters Revenge's Judging:Usage of words: 10
Originality: 9
Accessibility: 10
Join-ability: 10
Storyline: 10
Total: 49
The storyline was interesting but it is still another basic princesses fall in love story.
Okay!
So, what I have done is taken the total score for each role play. For each, I have then worked out the mean, to make an average judge score. The highest wins!
Our Final Destiny: 36.6
Wearing your heart on your head: 39.8
She loves me, she loves me not: 38.6
Wowie! That was a tightly run contest, but it looks like xSecond Setbackx has won, followed by x_Haunted-Fate_x in a close runner up position! However, I would like to thank all who entered!
If you liked this contest, and think we should do more, let us know in the feedback thread in the chatterbox forum.
Becki, over and out!
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