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Ok, I now have most of my writing edited and posted. I would really like some people to critique it and tell me what they think.
If you want to go to my site.
If you like what you see then tell your friends! If you don't then tell me what I can do better.

thank you.

im trying to, but the computer im on won't let me go to the website, so im gonna try when i get home.