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draconian_peacock
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 11:10 pm



Soul that is Lost to the World

A rainy day as cold as ice
A gentle breeze that could make you shiver
On this day a soul walks yet another path of despair
Happiness has now gone

whats this I hear,the gentle breeze is saying
Save her,for she might be lost forever
do we believe it or walk away
Love has gone alike the other feelings
Wishing for one day to be loved by
someone who will treat her better than others

Again the breeze says
save her for she might not know
so we hear again
soon everything stops
the only sound is silence
that's when we know that is what she is hearing right now

Again the breeze says
She need to know she is loved or she will be lost forever
Again we listened and we still stood in the silence
Then we saw that we were the only ones who could see her
for others just ignored her pain and suffering

yet as we watch and were about to help her
she disappears without a trace
the gentle breeze then says again
She is now lost wandering the Earth for eternity
Her soul has never known what love was like
so now she is but a wander of the many lost souls

The girl we have all known and seen
is now gone from us as if it were a dream
alas it wasn't and we have seen
she wasn't treated to kindly
for we are sorry to have judged and been harsh
we should have known
for we would of helped but alas she is gone
gone with the wind..





The Friend Who was Never there

Darkness has all
but gone
The Light of day is soon to fade
Years will pass when all hope
fails but do you care
my friend who was never there
I trusted thee for
several years
I call you
but your never there
My friend where are you
when I need you
no where I say
For you see Im alone
and shall forever be
my friend who was never there






An Unknown Place

An unknown place
of which I see
a place of sorrow
at my feet

Everywhere I look
sadness overcomes me

as I look I see people
crying,weeping all over this
place of which I entered

a little girl sit crying
for her dying cat

looking north what hast
to see a place of happiness
to be

I then walked the journey
there but to my surprise
it was only a foolish dream


Just Something(no name yet)



The streets are quiet as can be
the air is still as life to cease
a girl full of longing sits and waits
while the pain and the hatred come crawling back up to her

as it moves and on it goes until it stops
that is until it then consumes the girl
as she sits,she starts to cry,the tears of an angel falling
but to her surprise she has with her
a violin to be played like it has never been played before
she picks it up and begins to play,but the only thing to be heard
is the sadness and the pain she has felt for so long
a crowd soon forms,people hear the soft haunting melody

she is then done,by then the people are now staring and feel her pain that she yet has to live with.Well that is unless love finds her first
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 11:14 pm


nothing to new here,I just decided to put all of my poems together in one thread biggrin

draconian_peacock
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 3:33 pm


They're all really good. The first one is my favorite. It's imagery is so vivid, I loved it.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 6:54 pm


thank you biggrin

draconian_peacock
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 9:02 am


You should write some more.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 5:53 pm


*aplause*
I liked the first one too... it's very nice..

Maximilliardo


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:36 pm


Disappearance of Darkness





I wish

for an escape

an escape

from this pain



Pain that I have felt through out

my life

for someone to save me

and

take me away

from all of this pain



I see a light

through this tunnel of Darkness

it brightens and shines through

my realm of darkness



My hopes and dreams have

come at last

for the one person has

come to save me at last



So shall I say

but the light

is still to bright

to see who or what

it is



Until it lessens

and

my eyes adjust

for at the end of the tunnel

is my Paradise

and an angel

that was sent to help thee



The angel then leads me

from this tunnel

and helps me see

that atleast

a few people care

about me

one of my newest poems,besides Angels Flight
PostPosted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 8:48 pm


That is very pretty, you are a wonderful writer.

TabithaBane


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 1:17 pm


Mask



A mask is what I have apon

my face

it changes

almost everyday



This mask I have

on thy face

hides my feelings from every face



I pretend to be something

every day



when that something is

I am not



I wish to let this

mask disappear

for my

feelings to be

known



I wish to let go

of all this

misery



hence go to

my paradise



to be free and see



I dont have to

live

in this place

of

misery
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 8:04 am


Black Cat



Dead of night
might mean fright
but light of day
may mean suns delight

when the sun has
faded and the moon
arisen

what do you see a
pair of yellow eyes
staring up at you

as it looks an listens
around it soon takes off
towards down town

in the shadows of which
it hides
it seems to me to
scare most people

on it walks and soon
comes to a stop
in the light of a old
wooden post and then
what do we see but a
little black cat which
looks to be hungry to me

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one of my older poems I wrote 2 or 3 years ago

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:00 pm


Melody of a Storm


Hearing the constant sound of
falling water along with the distant
sound of thunder

I feel full of lonliness
and despair
for my Angel isnt
here with me

The thunders getting louder
and my eyes
keep closing
my mind begins to wander
and soon Ive fallen asleep
to the storms sweet melody




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http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=10608873

the link is to an older poem that is posted up on here
PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:36 am


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:18 pm


ninja
PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:58 pm


An Unknown Place is my favorite. I can relate in so many ways....its unreal. Beautiful work. biggrin However, in most of your poems, the old English takes away from the overall impact of the piece. If it was written in vernacular speech, more people would understand and probably like it.

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