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draconian_peacock Captain
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 Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 9:07 am
Leave me to Die
for I must be hated
Leave me to Die
for no one loves me
no one cares
alas im alone
wishing to be freed from my internal grave
alas that day shall not come
so Leave me to Die in my bitter lonliness
I must be a bad influence to others
for some just leave me in despair
So plz Leave me to Die
in my time of need
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 5:28 pm
It's a poem that actually reflects on the majority of kids in puberty... very darkening, but if it was not, what would be the point of the guild? Dark..
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draconian_peacock Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 5:32 pm
true,plus I wrote this poem this past summer,bc of alot of s**t that has happened,also most poems I write are mostly about me
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 5:45 pm
The only problem I have with personal poems is that I can't really react on it, if I do not know the circumstances.. I can imagen the emotion, but if I'll ever get the true feeling and emotion behind it, that is not up to me...
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draconian_peacock Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 5:51 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 4:31 pm
at times i feel the same way! great poem!
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:31 pm
that was really powerful and sad but i find thoose to be the best poems. Btw i know it's kind of sudden but i was wondering if anyone could read my poetry im looking for critisism and advice please. And since your poem was really powerful im sure you give great advice if you wouldn't mind. well in case you want to the poems are "for anyone whoose ever had a crush" and "anyone else who writes free verse can also post here" long and unnnessecary i know but im a newbie. Thankyou for your time.
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 4:51 pm
It was very expressive.......well done.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 9:22 am
That was very dark.
A very interesting poem,indeed.
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Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 7:49 pm
I like the poem. It's simple but true. I've felt this way and was once trapped in my own bell jar. I enjoyed reading it.
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