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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 11:36 am
Let the rain of what I feel right now come down... I was not sure if this was the appropriate forum, but seeing has the help subforum is closed and the fanfiction forum seems a bit odd for me, I put it in here.
I feel in the mood to write a oneshot. I have never done it before, and I really want to. Of course, a lemon between Inuyasha and Kagome will probably be what it'll focus on. But I need a plot that is interesting! A new and exciting adventure to get these two together.
Just some random ideas may help. Hopefully I'll get some before my writing mood leaves me and before I head off to work!Let the rain come down.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:56 am
Focusing on sex between the characters is great, as long as you do it in a realistic manor, lol.
First of all, decide whether you're going to have Kagome as a virgin or not. Decide for Inuyasha as well, because depending on that fact, the sex will either be hard, passionate and awesome or blundering, awkward and slightly embarrassing. It's also probably not going to feel awesome for Kagome if she's a virgin. I can't stand lemons where she's all: OMG! YES! YES, VIRGIN SEX IS AWESOME!!! STOP IT SOME MORE!!!
...A virgin would not act like that durring their first time.
And if you want to tell the story of the first time they make love, you can easily start out with them... getting in the mood, you know? The awkward talk before hand, the nervousness, and pain mixed with the slight pleasure.
And you could also write two different sex scenes in a one-shot. You can have them try again after the strange first time, and then they can have awesome sex. Yum. xd
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 2:43 pm
Let the rain of what I feel right now come down...I know how to set up the sex scenes and how they would act in different situations, I just want kind of a background story. Not just, "they left everyone and found an empty place and had sex" like most lemons are.
:0 And my first time having sex was like that. Well, we had to stay quiet, and it was nerve-racking, but it wasn't "Oh my gosh I can't believe I am doing this why wont it end?!" like most people think the first time having sex would be. Let the rain come down.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 5:33 pm
What? lol. I wasn't hoping it would end my first time, it just wasn't the most comfortable thing in the world. xd It wasn't horribly painful, just kinda awkward and... uh... uncomfortable. Totally did not orgasm. Yeah. lol.
I'm just saying that sex the first time isn't amazing. It never really is. It's the third or fourth time that it gets really good. sweatdrop
Backstory... It just kinda depends. Is it an AU or a Canon fic?
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 5:49 pm
Let the rain of what I feel right now come down...Yeah, I never orgasm during sex. <<; TMI, sorry! lol. But I hardly ever allow my female characters to orgasm unless from... o.O well, other things that would actually make a girl go. Not many women can orgasm from intercourse, as men cannot just orgasm and then be ready to go again. I try to make it as realistic as possible. That is also why most my sex scenes do not contain too much intercourse, because I let it be short... for realistic purposes.
I am going to make it a canon fic. I have yet to really make one yet. So far I just made up random stuff... o.O I think I might turn it into a jealousy type thing. Like, how they get together.
Kouga has asked for Kagome's help to find his lost jewel shards, and Inuyasha isn't happy about it. She went off without anyone else, because Inuyasha threw a fit... hmm... It's the new moon, so Sango and Miroku stayed behind to be with him. I might make a crazy demon Inuyasha sex thing. Those can get old, but it might work. Like, Inuyasha's demon side comes out when he feels cornered, or defenseless. Maybe feeling defenseless to keep Kouga from stealing his woman, his demon side takes control to get her >D Muwahahahaha. Let the rain come down.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 7:40 pm
B L ! S S Let the rain of what I feel right now come down...Yeah, I never orgasm during sex. <<; TMI, sorry! lol. But I hardly ever allow my female characters to orgasm unless from... o.O well, other things that would actually make a girl go. Not many women can orgasm from intercourse, as men cannot just orgasm and then be ready to go again. I try to make it as realistic as possible. That is also why most my sex scenes do not contain too much intercourse, because I let it be short... for realistic purposes.
I am going to make it a canon fic. I have yet to really make one yet. So far I just made up random stuff... o.O I think I might turn it into a jealousy type thing. Like, how they get together.
Kouga has asked for Kagome's help to find his lost jewel shards, and Inuyasha isn't happy about it. She went off without anyone else, because Inuyasha threw a fit... hmm... It's the new moon, so Sango and Miroku stayed behind to be with him. I might make a crazy demon Inuyasha sex thing. Those can get old, but it might work. Like, Inuyasha's demon side comes out when he feels cornered, or defenseless. Maybe feeling defenseless to keep Kouga from stealing his woman, his demon side takes control to get her >D Muwahahahaha. Let the rain come down. That's actually not too bad! Oh! And you could have him change back to hanyou when they're in the middle of gettin' it on! So, Inuyasha comes after Kouga in demon form, and to save Kouga and get Inuyasha to calm down, they have sex (When Inuyasha pulls her away from Kouga, he can whist her off and fondle her, letting her know full well what he wants, that horny b*****d!) and in the middle, Inuyasha changes back and is all like: WTF? And freaks out, and Kagome calms him down at then they finish their sex and Inuyasha has an awesome orgams, cause guys are lucky jerks and can get off easier. And then, cause he feels bad, he pleases Kagome in other ways as she instructs him and orgasms that way. ...Hey, I'D read it! XD
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:39 pm
Let the rain of what I feel right now come down... x3 Yes! That sounds great. But there would have to be a reason as to why Kouga does not chase after to try and rescue Kagome...
Maybe he knows that Inuyasha is taking her as his mate and backs down :0 Hmm...
At least that is better than to just say, "And Kouga watched as they fled away all like "o.o wtf dog breath just took Kagome. Oh well" "Let the rain come down.
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:32 am
Well, I'm sure Kouga also knows that Inuyasha could kick his a** in demon form. You could have them go at it a bit before Kagome and him leave.
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 10:52 am
Let the rain of what I feel right now come down... 8D I am at the fight scene. It will be done soon, muwahahaha. Well, as long as I stop getting these interruptions >.< Work. Damn job.Let the rain come down.
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