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 Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 10:52 pm
I'm not quite sure if this belongs here but whatever....It's my manga I'm working on....I can't draw it so I'll eventually hire someone to draw it for me...Like Death Note....If anybody want's to hear about it.....just....you know.....
The basic plot revolves around Vampires.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 6:53 pm
O.o Cool ^_^
I wanna hear more
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Korikitsune0 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 8:03 pm
The main character; Karasuman, Nicknamed Raven; is attacked by 3 mysterious cloaked figures and beat down, but saved by a blast of energy from a mysterious figure.
He wakes up later that week in a hut, having been found by a slightly elderly couple and taken care of.
After a few months, he has settled into the village quite well, he was even beginning to form a relationship with a local girl, Catherine/Kitty.
Tradgedy strikes, the cloaked figures return while he is out in the woods, destroying the entire village. When Raven returns, he finds Kitty, nearly dead and 2 vampires remain. (Right >< the cloaked figures were vampires) Revan's eyes begin to glow red, revealing that he to is a vempire. He defeats the 2 vampires with ease. Then he bands down over Kitty with tears in both of thier eyes. He asks if she wishes to become a vimpire, to live and to walk the night. She agrees, he drinks some of her blood, and her his.
As she writes in pain from the transformation, Raven walks away into the forest, leaving behind a letter, and a vial of red liquid (not blood though)
That's chapter 1.
The whole, intro chapter.
yeah.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 8:40 pm
Also, I forgot to mention in my first post, my dream is to get this published in Shonen Jump.
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:38 am
korikitsune0 Also, I forgot to mention in my first post, my dream is to get this published in Shonen Jump. Wow that's some dream though,but the only chance for an american comic like that ever be published is probably by Tokyopop >.< from their contests and what not It's very good tho' ^_^.Is this now fanfiction.net or any other sites?
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:42 am
Nah, It's only planned on a few sheets of paper and in my head.
I want to get a professional artist from/in japan to illustrate it, and submit it through him but still be able to claim credit for the story......or something like that.
A lot of the Main Character issues are balanced between the 2, Kitty, and Raven.
There are 3 other minor major characters who show up a bit later; Lunar the phantom speed Werewolf; Caellach, another vampire weilding a broadsword; and an unamed human female who weilds a spear and is the love intrest for Lunas.
Raven Travels alone for a while, all of these other 3 join up with Kitty.
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:45 am
korikitsune0 Nah, It's only planned on a few sheets of paper and in my head. I want to get a professional artist from/in japan to illustrate it, and submit it through him but still be able to claim credit for the story......or something like that. A lot of the Main Character issues are balanced between the 2, Kitty, and Raven. There are 3 other minor major characters who show up a bit later; Lunar the phantom speed Werewolf; Caellach, another vampire weilding a broadsword; and an unamed human female who weilds a spear and is the love intrest for Lunas. Raven Travels alone for a while, all of these other 3 join up with Kitty. That's a good way to get published or get noticed by other publishers. Hey you should write on here ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:47 am
It's hard for me to write out the action scenes that I plan to have in comic form.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 5:30 am
Volume 1: Beneath This Soft Moonlight
1st Shadow- Beneath This Soft Moonlight
2nd Shadow- Tears of Blood
3rd Shadow- Two Hearts
4th Shadow- Two Hearts 2: Flying on Black Wings
5th Shadow- The Hands of the Clock
6th Shadow- Empty Flight
That's my current setup right now, but I hvae up to.......volume......62 ><
I'll post stuff like this for a while. I'll post one Volume's title and chapters and then give brief chapter summaries in the next post(s) for a few volumes. I don't want to get up to the major plot twists though.
Yeah, I wanted to call the chapters Nights, but D. Gray-Man took that.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 5:49 am
2nd Shadow- Tears of Blood: Kitty wakes up to find Raven gone. All she can find of him is a note and a bottle of red liquid (not exactly blood) The note has directions too a Vampire sanctuary to the East. It also tells her not to go after him b/c he was the cause of this, as he is in trouble with the Vampire Lords. The bottle is filled with something called, "Blood Tears of Lilith" they work as a sort of sunscreen for vampires. It doesn't make them at full strength in sunlight, but it still prevents them from dying. Raven watches her from the cliffside, wondering if he could've done anything else for her, then wanders off. The rest of the chapter involves Kitty looking at all she's known and loved in ruins before crying herself to sleep in the morning under a crud e shelter.
3rd Shadow- Two Hearts: Kitty has an internal struggle before deciding to ignore the warning and follow Raven to the south. She manages to pick up his scent and follow it. She is stalked by a mysterious figure. Meanwhile, Raven gets into a battle with one of the weaker vampires from the Raid and completely destroys him.
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:10 pm
4th Shadow- Two Hearts 2: Flying on Black Wings --- This chapter involves Raven being stalked by 2 mysterious figures, one of them the stronger of the 3 original chasers from the first few pages. He has an 8 on his forehead. The other has a 9 over his eye. They have followed after sensing his energy from the battle in the previous chapter. As he runs, he thinks of Kitty, and she thinks of him. at the end, they catch up to him and take off thier hoods, revealing thir faces in a dramatic double-page spread.
5th Shadow- The Hands of the Clock ---- After the dramatic reveal of the stalkers with thier numbers, (Durring the chases you can only vaguely see the 8, which also was partially seen durring the first chase) They reveal themselves as the 'secret service" of the 13 Vampire Lords. The 12 servants are known as the Hands of the Clock. Each lord sends one man to the team and they are numbered in order of strength and ability. 12 is the weakest, 1 is the strongest. Thier number is tatooed, or otherwise shown, somewhere on thier body.....hence, 8 and 9. 9Also they all have nicknames) 8 is known as "The Fiend" and 9 is known as "The Broken Wing" The 4th Lord once had a man on the Team, but he was forever destroyed, and his man was banished from the team, but his man was number Zero, the center of the clock. (This is mentioned in a quick tidbit in the conversation) Number 8 mentions to number 9 to beware of Raven's "secret powers" They begin to attack in a pinser formation, Raven barely fends off both strikes and then flees.
6th Shadow- Empty Flight --- Both Kitty and Raven spread thier vampire wings (Which yas they have) and fly. Raven fleeing, Kitty attempting to follow him. Kitty thinks about her feelings as she flies, feeling empty inside. Raven is cornered yet again and continues to defend himself. As he begins to weaken, 8 decides to leave, as this no longer intrests him.
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 6:23 pm
Volume 2: innocence
7th Shadow- Flight of the Fiend
8th Shadow- Chased [by the Demon]
9th Shadow- Caught [by the Demon]
10th Shadow- Bloodstink 12
11th Shadow- Need to Feel Loved
12th Shadow- Bloodstrength
13th Shadow- Darkness in Darkness
14th Shadow- innocence
15th Shadow- Alone in the Dark
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 5:07 pm
7th Shadow- Flight of the Fiend --- This is the chapter where Number 8 makes his exit. As he flies off, he wonders about what happened when he first attacked Raven as Raven's battle with Number 9 rages on.
8th Shadow- Chased [by the Demon] --- (The title is a reference to the japanese version of 'tag' or chase the demon, where the "Demon" is the one who's it.) Raven decides to attepmt to flee yet again, but he's pursued by Number 9 everywhere he goes. A furious chase battle ensues.
9th Shadow- Caught [by the Demon] --- Number 9 finally catches up to Raven and creates a barriar so that he cannot escape. The furious battle continues.
10th Shadow- Bloodstink 12 --- The figure stalking Kitty is revealed to be, Number 12! The weakest number, but still, Kitty isn't as strong as Raven. She wonders about this figure who summarizes thier status and goal, explaining that she has the same smell as her target, Raven.
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:13 pm
11th Shadow- Need to Feel Loved --- (The title is the name of a techno song i like ^^)As Raven and Kitty fight, they think about each other. Most of the chapter has no dialouge until, towards the end, Kitty resolves not to let herself despair and to follow Raven as long as it takes. (both of them are taking a beating for most of thier fight durring the chapter)
12th Shadow- Bloodstrength --- Kitty, finally having resolved to win, draws upon Raven's blood inside her to boost her strength (because Raven is a powerful Vampire so since he blooded her, she would be stronger than if she were blooded by a normal vampire) and she begins to turn the battle around.
13th Shadow- Darkness in Darkness --- The Vampire Lords hold a council (they are shadowed so you can only get thier basic outlines) and they send out numbers 10 and 11 to wreak havoc where Numbers 8 and 9 are (wondering where 12 is) and send out the others to various places. A mysterious long-haired figure watches Raven's fight and smiles.
14th Shadow- innocence --- Kitty finally wins against number 12 and destroys him. A different mysterious figure watches her, marvelling at her destructive will balancing out her innocent side while she herself wonders similar things.
15th Shadow- Alone in the Dark --- Kitty cries to herself as she chases after Raven, realizing that for now she's all alone, the weight of the village's destruction finally dawning on her. She cries herself to sleep, wishing for Raven to hold her in his arms. The figure watching her leaves to pursue other intrests.
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:18 pm
Volume 3: Full Moon Fever
16th Shadow- Midnight Sadness
17th Shadow- Shadow on the Moon
18th Shadow- Attacked [by the Demon]
19th Shadow- Full Moon Fever
20th Shadow- stolen –inTo thE Night-
21st Shadow- With Closed Eyes
22nd Shadow- See you on the wall
23rd Shadow- STEAL ALL (even your heart)
24th Shadow- Cut
25th Shadow- MissING W
Volume 4: by 3
26th Shadow- Full Moon Fever: sTarT This parTy
27th Shadow- Enraged [by the Demon]
28th Shadow- Feared [by the Demon]
29th Shadow- Flight of the Broken Wing
30th Shadow- The Second Shadow
31st Shadow- Painted Town
32nd Shadow- by 3
33rd Shadow- Fanning the Flames
Volume 5: like Clockwork
34th Shadow- like Clockwork
35th Shadow- gRoWtH
36th Shadow- descending…
37Th Shadow- Bars and Blades
38th Shadow- Bladewin
39th Shadow- inTo tHE spiRE
40th Shadow- Fair Maiden
41st Shadow- Wolfwin
42nd Shadow- Throne Room
Anyone want to try to predict upcoming plot by the chapter titles and previous plot info?
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