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nyopchu
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 3:03 pm


Kalaeris
-PHASE 6: After its refusal to accept, Orb launches an attack on the EA. The EA team's debut, with the four new units out to attack the incoming forces.


Character List
Richard Henderson - Sword of Kira Yamato
Paul Reisz - brianchan90
WIlliam Archer - brianchan90
Alex Raven - Kalaeris
Tanya Lowe - Kalaeris
Cagalli Yula Attha - lito wanderer
Shoji Buren - Mrs. Athrun Zala
Kira Yamato - Sword of Kira Yamato
Lacus Clyne - [-Lacus--Clyne-]
Audrina Kavira - lito wanderer
Kairynn Kamiya - angel__tear
Ryoku Takashon - Sword of Kira Yamato
Tarren Kuroshi - brianchan90
Daniel Ramires - Sword of Kira Yamato
Ciel Kasaka - Hikari_Tsubasa
Athrun Zala - Mrs. Athrun Zala
Naval Captain - ?
ORB Emirs - Mrs. Athrun Zala and lito wanderer
PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 7:52 pm


I suppose now the Orb group will have to act again? That should probably start the PHASE if we plan to have some action in it.

Kalaeris
Crew


angel__tear
Crew

Melodious Giver

PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 3:10 pm



may i suggest we start bringing ryoku, tarren and kairynn into the scene? it can sort of lead to their meeting maybe a couple of phases later. oh and we definitely need to see more athrun too.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 4:17 pm


yeah, but i still can't wait for the debute of the team! oh yeah!! and cagalli in a storm too... XD

do you think she should get back the atkasuki from mwu? and what of the archangel crew actually?

lito wanderer


brianchan90

PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 4:31 pm


hmmm... i'd say they should be informed of the fight, but don't take any actions yet.

it would be cool for cagalli to have the atkasuki back yeah....

here's the potential list of scenes i've drawn up:

-fleet from atlantic federation: see richard henderson giving orders from a land base, conference with naval captain.

-A-0 crew talking amongst themselves before launching. (topics anyone?)

-ORB Emirs Meeting. Cagalli is having trouble controlling certain members who want to open fire first on the EAF. she takes off to command defence plan with military base.

-Kira talks to Lacus via communication screen. Lacus forbids him from fighting? dunno...

-fighting begins: random exchange of talk between A-0, Henderson and Cagalli.

-OR: Kairynn and Audrina watched televised broadcast that is available only to military and politicians. Kairynn voices concerns of another war.

-OR: Ryoku and Tarren reach nearby military base and sneak in to find more information about the hidden one they discovered. see soldiers crowded around screen in base room? talks to one another about it.

-back to fighting. A-0 continue fight. Cagalli goes into battle. winner of battle determined.

-OR: Daniel and Ciel hear rumours of a fight, but cannot find any broadcast about it.

-OR: Athrun watches fight from military base he snuck into.

dunno XD made most of it up on the spot. go and modify it and change it to what works out right in the phase.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 9:34 pm


Well, I don't know if we should have Cagalli jump into a mobile suit right away. That would be so out of character...well, given her status in government. Though, I would like to see a chat between her and Kira where Kira convinces her to take command of the military instead of angstying about it because no one would listen to her "no war" ways.

nyopchu
Vice Captain


[-Lacus--Clyne-]

PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 8:02 pm


i think mishu's suggestion makes more sense brian. it is a great outline though!
PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:02 pm


i think daniel and ciel should be making their way to meet with audrina. then in phase 7, ciel and kairynn can sorta briefly meet, but it'll be more about audrina and daniel. and maybe kairynn meets ryoku and tarren? or that could be phase 8 or 9 XD

yeah, having cagalli fling herself into battle isn't really right. she's got too much responsibilities, and it wouldn't make sense for her to do that if she's targeted for assassination. leave her on the ground for now.

Sword of Kira Yamato


angel__tear
Crew

Melodious Giver

PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:12 pm



^.^ i think the general outline and the suggested modifications are fantastic! perhaps we can also have shoji barging in on the conversation between cagalli and kira? it would show there is a problem between them that will make cagalli's work even more difficult ^^"

and i'd also like to congratulate lito, mishu and kira on their scenes in phase 5 as well!
PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 8:03 am


Well, what's going to be interesting is when Cagalli has her council meeting. Though, Lito and I will have to fill in for the other members. That will be both awkward and confusing. Someone is going to have to declare war on the Federation and I highly doubt that Cagalli or Shoji will be the ones. Doesn't mean that we need a new character. I think we have enough characters for all of us. Don't you agree?

nyopchu
Vice Captain


[-Lacus--Clyne-]

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 4:35 pm


i agree. i say you or lito can just fill it in mishu, just use a different colour to inidicate it. the person who shouts that out can be nameless...
PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 9:09 pm


brianchan90
SCENES:

-fleet from atlantic federation: see richard henderson giving orders from a land base, conference with naval captain.

-A-0 crew talking amongst themselves before launching. (topics anyone?)

-ORB Emirs Meeting. Cagalli is having trouble controlling certain members who want to open fire first on the EAF. she tells them they shouldn't fight but no one listens to her.

-Kira talks to Lacus via communication screen. Lacus forbids him from fighting

-fighting begins: random exchange of talk between A-0

-OR: Kairynn and Audrina watched televised broadcast that is available only to military and politicians. Kairynn voices concerns of another war.

-OR: Ryoku and Tarren reach nearby military base and sneak in to find more information about the hidden one they discovered. see soldiers crowded around screen in base room? talks to one another about it.

-back to fighting. A-0 continue against ORB Astrays. shows Henderson talking about why they initiate fighting. Astray units talk amongst each other. they want Cagalli to lead them.

-Kira pulls Cagalli aside after meeting. convinces her to take command of military defenses instead of being "angstying" - quote mishu. Shoji walks in and offers to take the job, but Cagalli refuses.

-OR: Daniel and Ciel hear rumours of a fight, but cannot find any broadcast about it. they're walking to meet with Audrina and hear it broadcasting in a meeting room.

-OR: Athrun watches fight from military base he snuck into.

-battle ends. both sides retreat.


alright - modified one.

brianchan90


[-Lacus--Clyne-]

PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:31 pm


alright then. i suggest the A-0 team gets started.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:39 pm



i am hoping i am make mishu's job easier by posting the characters then. that way she can just copy and paste, yes?

Richard Henderson - Sword of Kira Yamato
Paul Reisz - brianchan90
WIlliam Archer - brianchan90
Alex Raven - Kalaeris
Tanya Lowe - Kalaeris
Cagalli Yula Attha - lito wanderer
Shoji Buren - Mrs. Athrun Zala
Kira Yamato - Sword of Kira Yamato
Lacus Clyne - [-Lacus--Clyne-]
Audrina Kavira - lito wanderer
Kairynn Kamiya - angel__tear
Ryoku Takashon - Sword of Kira Yamato
Tarren Kuroshi - brianchan90
Daniel Ramires - Sword of Kira Yamato
Ciel Kasaka - Hikari_Tsubasa
Athrun Zala - Mrs. Athrun Zala
Naval Captain - ?
ORB Emirs - Mrs. Athrun Zala and lito wanderer

angel__tear
Crew

Melodious Giver


nyopchu
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 4:25 pm


We have a naval captain????

Well, I guess I should open the next thread up. Oh, and thanks angel!
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