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ok my brother just got a new cell phone and i want his old one so he told me to write a 500 word essay 5 paragraphs so this is the essay


why I should have Ryan’s old cell phone
Brinnngggg!!!!! Brinnngggg!!!!! Brinnngggg!!!!! “Hello” “hi what’s up?” Man I wish I had a cell phone so bad just think of how good it be to have my own cell phone. If I had a cell phone well I would be able to make calls from school like if I have play practice and forgot I did I could just call and say mom I have practice today so I need to stay at school. I should have Ryan’s old cell phone because I know grade 4s that have brand new cell phones, Ryan has no use for the phone, and I really want a cell phone.

First of all, I should get Ryan’s old cell phone because I know grade 4s with brand new cell phones the least I could get would be Ryan’s old cell phone. They used it for important things like plans changing. They didn’t need it I do have to admit but still I’m going into grade 6 and grades 6’s are very old people who have more problems like they go out a lot more and they are way, way more busy.

Second of all, Ryan has no use for the phone. He just got a new cell phone. Like there no point on just letting it lay there without any use, and why would you recycle a fairly new used phone when you can just give it to me so it won’t cost any money for a new phone. So why would anyone want to have to pay for a brand new phone then you can just get a fairly new fairly used phone for free the only fee would be the fee every month or whatever and just the phone cards. It just doesn’t make sense to me why you would?

Last of all, I just really want a cell phone. Like Ryan I will help out around the house more so you do less work and I’ll get money for phone cards and stuff, plus I love you and I just want a phone so bad please, please, please. I’m begging you. I’ll even be your slave for a week, maybe a month, and I’ll let you have the computer when ever you want it for the rest of the year. I’ll use grandma’s computer. All of my friends are getting one if they don’t already and come on everyone needs a cell phone even if it’s old and not a camera phone or mp3 phone its better then nothing at all. Like your new phones hot so yes it might be better but at least you can call people on a phone.

In conclusion, I should get Ryan’s old phone because I know grade 4s with brand new cell phones, Ryan has no use for the phone, and I just really want a cell phone. So please, please let me have your old cell phone and thank you so much if you do.

i need feed back is it good ????

this was made for my brother and just to let you know i got the cell phone

trust me i would do almost anything for something i wanted

ya well my brother's old phone has -89 cents