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GarretJax

PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:27 pm


Username:Garretjax
Name:Ryan David Connor
Age:27
Occupation:Vetinarian
Gender: Male
Height:5"11
Weight:146 pounds
Human Appearance: He has always been a very lanky person, with little muscle mass. Paranoid of bugs, he always wears a long sleeve thermal shirt with a t-shirt over it, and long blue jeans. He's also always brings a hoodie were ever he goes, usually wearing it around his waist. He prefers to keep his thin Brown hair at medium length stoping at right about the jaw
line. Leaving his hair messy and unkempt when he doesnt have to work. He has very unique eyes one being half blue half brown, the other being green.The large orbs constantly being accused of being colored with contacts. His face is framed by his long bangs taking some attention away from his big nose, and chin.
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((Artwork and Coloring by :Ropin and Riden))
Personality:He's always been a farely shy person around new people but opens up once he knows gets to know them. he likes to crack jokes alot, hiding behind them. He uses his jokes hide his insecurities. Slightly obsesive compulsive he stresses about the weirdest things such as: the players on a foosball table being lined up, or that the candy at a gas station all be ordered. Other than the few strange compulsions he is a very sloppy person at home cleaning only when he absolutely has to. He has many strange phobias such as: the fear of bugs, spiders, concrete bridges,Mentally retarted people, and lime gellatin. liked amongst most of his peers, He dedicates alot of his time to his work. Still depressed from the death of his late wife, he has yet to get close to any other women. Still finding himself crying himself to sleep sometimes.
History:Being a sickly child from birth, he has always been very tiny, skinny, and pale. Born to a Newyork family he was also very poor. Causing him to be the target of much ridicule in school. He had few freinds up until he joined the band in eigth grade, he then quickly became popular amongst his small group of freinds. Known for always being able to make someone laugh. His sophmore year he met his wife to be, and fell in love quickly. They continued dating through highschool, at the objection of her parents, and married shortly after graduation. His wife went into the Medical Feild and became a prenatal nurse. Ryan having allways loved animals went into Vetinarian school, graduating second in his class to receive his doctorate in vetinarian studies. He then went back to school for another two years to specialize in exotic animal treatment. Taking an Extreme intrest in Tigers and their rare color mutations. He Became a traveling Vetinarian, treating exotic pets across the country. One day on a plane ride back home he got a call saying the Women's Center his wife worked at had been bombed, and that she hadnt made it. He went into a deep depression for the next three years. He grew very hostile towards anyone who tried to help him, and become angry at god.Saying he didnt give a damn about his plan. ignoring Adive to go see a pshychiatrist, he just went deeper and deeper into depression.He also began taking some of the pain pills, and anti depressents he used on his patients.
Why he's Coming to the Island:
He recieved a letter in the mail saying that he was invited to come out and observe a new kind of Vetinarian study. Not really caring at the time , he accepted and basically forgot about it. Until his plane ticket arrived that is, and begrudgingly he got on a plane for the first time since his wife died and he cried for the first hour, but unbeknownst to him he was about to encounter wonders that would push his depression to the very edge of his mind.
Wanted Animals:
Blue Maltese Tiger
White Bengal Tiger
Melanistic Black Tiger
PostPosted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 12:32 pm


Random Fun Facts about Ryan
Favorite Band:Red Hot Chilli Peppers
Favorite Tv show: Scrubs
Favorite Comedian: Lewis Black
Favorite Song: "Animal i have Become" by Three Days Grace
Hobbies: Video Games, Fencing, Rappeling, Hiking, Rock Climbing, Reading, Sleeping and Animals
Favorite Quote: "Dieing doesnt all ways deserve a monolauge"
Favorite Author: R.A. Salvatore
Favotie SuperHero: The Punisher

A Day in the Life of
Ryan stretched, yawning as he woke up. He looked at the alarm clock that buzzed noisely across from him. he had set all the way across the room, because he knew that if it was with ion arms reach he'd just turn off the alarm everytime it rang. he stood up andwalked over to the bath room undressing as he went. Right before getting in the shower he pulled an apple out of the fruit basket he kept in the bath room. Once in he turned on his shower Radio and started listening to some oldies.

Getting out of the shower he threw his apple core into the trash. He turned on the Tv as he picked out his clothes for the day. It was on G4 and they were playing an old episode of x-play."oh why wont they let that stupid show die already." He pulled on his first long-sleeved thermal shirt, doing it quickly so his still wet hair wouldnt get the collar wet. He sighed in frustration as he realized he didnt have any other clean shirts. He looked down at the pile of dirty clothes next to him. It was big enough now to come up to his chest, "Damnit, i gotta go by detergent now." He picked up a T-shirt from about the mid point of the pile and put it on. He could just febreeze it when he got to work.

He picked up his back pack and walked out of his room heading towards the kitchen. He pulled box of cinnamon waffles out of the freezer and pulled out two, and began eating them cold. putting the box away he grimaced as he smelled the trash."damnit" yet another thing he'd have to do later. He walked out side with one waffle still in his mouth. He hopped on his bicycle and began the long trip to work.

When he got to work it was just about an hour before it was time to open, and there were already a few people there."Hey folks, any emergencies." no one responded."okay. well we're gonna open early today anyways some come on in." he unlocked the doors and let everyone in before him. he walked past everyone into the back, and got the dirtiest look from his assistant.

"did you let them in early again." Ryan had been scolded for this before, actually he might as well just make it official that they opened an hour earlier now. Since he did it almost every day.

"Yes Linda i did cant leave those people out in the cold." He was being sarcastic since it was a unusually hot summer." Besides this way we can treat more patients." Linda rolled her eyes in walked away. He frowned and shrugged as she left. He couldnt help it unless he was busy working he couldnt stand to be at this clinic it just reminded him to much of her. His eyes teared up a small bit before he wiped them away. Linda came back in with the first pets chart. He opened it up looked it over and sighed. tilting his head back out into the waiting room." Mrs. George for the LAST time a hair ball doesnt mean your cat has cancer."

He smiled as he pat the little girl on the head."it'll be alright fido is in heaven now." the little girl smiled as she walked out of the room. As soon as he had left he rolled his eyes."yeh cataching a ball thrown by god." He hated having to tell that same stupid story to kids everytime. He still beleived in god he just couldnt stand the b*****d. how could he ever trust anyone that could do something like that. He leaned against the wall and slowly slid to the ground as he broke down and began crying. Linda was about to come in with the next chart when she heard him. She went out to the front and looked out across the lobby.

"i'm sorry for the inconveniance but the doctor is having to deal with an emergency in the back, so it'll be awhile before he is able to see you all. If there's anyone with an appointment who would like to reshcedule you may do so now." She smiled apologetically as a few people left. she fealt so bad for the poor guy but there was nothing she could do for him."oh hello Mr. Franks, would you like to reschedule for say...... next tuesday.

An hour and a half late later Ryan just sat there staring at the wall when Linda came back into the room. "Is it closig time yet." She nodded saying that it had been for the last twenty minutes."oh okay sorry about that i dont know what came over me i just forgot to take my meds this morning." He slowly got up and shook the dust of his coat."oh well i'll be leaving now." He walked past her and went outside. He locked the front door, he took his lab coat off and put it into his bag. Getting on his bike he began the hour long ride home.

He walked in the back door and threw his bag on the ground he went straight to his medicine cabnit and opened it up. inside was every kind of anti depressent/pain killer you could imagine. He took some of the strongest he had and laid out on the Bed."damnit" He had forgotten to go through that one last box he had left packed up of her stuff. He would have Started crying again but the drugs had already started to take effect, and with a thud his head fell onto the pillow and he was asleep.

GarretJax


Tinfoal Technical

PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 2:36 pm


Hmm...

I'm not yet going to approve this, but only by a thread. Characteristically speaking, it seems that Ryan's a bit of a thrown-together chap, you say that he's bad socially, then the next moment, you claim that he loves cracking jokes, and being around people. He's OCD-ish, but messy, etc; quite frankly, I can understand someone being hard to read, but this is kinda ridiculous.

Other than that, I have very few qualms with this character, some things are just... messy. Clean it up, make the whole story run a little more smoothly, run the post through spellcheck a few times, and we'll see.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 2:54 pm


he's not bad socially i said he was shy when he first meets people, i understand the messy but this guy is me with just a tragic happening in his life. so i don't see how hes messy sorry.

GarretJax


GarretJax

PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:42 am


there i changed his personality, i think i explain better why he cracks jokes all the time. and i changed how he got the ticket i just realized that my first idea was to unrealistic
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