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 Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 4:11 pm
This is a poem I had to do for my creative writing class last year and I wanted to know what people thought. Keep in mind I do NOT like poetry in the least bit, especially writing it. But this poem is supposed to be Tara's last words to Willow. Enjoy.
3/5/07
Period 5 Creative Writing
Willow and Tara’s last conversation
“Xander,” Tara replies after the kiss.
“That wasn’t the answer I had in mind,” Willow replied.
Little did they know, Warren’s bullet wouldn’t miss.
“I’m sorry,” Tara said. “You know how much I’m in love with him,” Tara lied.
“So now I’m not good enough?”
Tara said, “Baby, you know I don’t want anyone with any extra… stuff.”
Willow chimed, “I love you so much!”
Tara replied, “I don’t know what I would ever do without you.”
They kiss. Their lips barely touch.
Tara continues, “I love you too.”
Then it came.
The bullet supplied its pain.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:28 am
Still looks good to me...do you have more?
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:58 am
Procopius_Mirdain Still looks good to me...do you have more? *pounds fists on table* MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 5:32 am
of school has started for you I know this is not fair...More poems please
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:40 pm
Those poems confused me.
Can you explain a bit more...?
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