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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:03 am
I know its not as good as Ixidor's but I want to know what people think. Please post comments in here and on my journal.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 5:05 am
Not bad for your 1st chapter. It had good use of weapons and characters and your imagination is good. xd So far I haven't read Ixidor's story so I do not know who's story is better.
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Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 4:18 am
From what I've read so far, it's very good. 3nodding
I can't compare to Ixidor's story because I haven't read it yet. sweatdrop
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