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chibi_inuangel

PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:17 pm


=] My poetry that I've written... haii~ I'm still not getting any better than since I last posted poetry, which it like... @_@ too long ago. Well, here I go.

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Mirror, Mirror
"When you look at me,
What do you see?
Funny and cute, and somewhat petit,
I stand tall, though not on my feet.
Many times crazy, silly, or weird,
Yes, I ate candy, just like you feared.
This girl you see is hyper and loud,
And I often hang out with a similar crowd.
My long hair includes neo shoelaces,
And even the dentist said I might need some braces.
I'm messy, carefree, and I easily laugh,
Although I'm musical, I'm not good at math.
But this is a mask, or so I think,
The truth is... I don't really like pink.
I feel a little shy, with empty insides,
So I painted false identities as I laid down all my lies."


That's one of 'em! I'll post more later if you guys enjoy it! Also, please don't steal my stuff... i worked really hard on my poetry, because it's enjoyable for me... =] 'kay? 'Kay.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 5:49 pm


I Likey it! ^_^
Very good

Chrissyxo
Crew


chibi_inuangel

PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 9:51 pm


Thankiiesss~~
PostPosted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 10:26 am


Kaaaay~ Here's another one. But i only got one part done so far.

Utopian Fantasies
"A world where hatred never comes
A world that has four chocolate suns
A world where you don't have to go to the loo
A world with white, sandy beaches too
A world that has all different kinds of fruits
A world with pirates sporting big black boots
A world where everyone has their own special place
And you can't ever forget that one boy's face..."


Yup! Part one! More to come, if rates are good!

chibi_inuangel


vampires_assistant27

PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:45 pm


wow I love ur poems!!! MORE MORE!
PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:29 pm


=] 'Kay, Utopian Fantasies, Part 2!

"A world where birds chirp, everyday with their chicks
A world that teaches people to use chopsticks
A world where it's easy to laugh, chortle or giggle
A world when you can pick up jell-o (it wont break, just jiggle)
A world where you can rule your own piece of land
A world where you can wipe tears with the back of your hand
A world where grass is made purely of cotton candy
Where nobody's name is (Lord help him)... "Dandy""

That's part two! Please tell me if you want the last part la~

chibi_inuangel


vampires_assistant27

PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 9:59 pm


MORE POEM!!!!! i like it 3nodding
i like the jello part in the second one, i hate it when it breaks crying
PostPosted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:43 am


U guys are sooo talented!

farredza93


chibi_inuangel

PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:20 am


Thanks!
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 2:07 am


smile they are right. your good

Twisted Object


chibi_inuangel

PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:01 pm


0_o then who voted "no"?
PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 10:35 am


OMG FOUR CHOCOLATE SUNS? COTTON CANDY GRASS? all that sounds like my world....cuz its PERFECT! except in my world....everyone harvests the cotton candy and feeds me...and my grandma doesnt call me fat......

Supa_Chocolate

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