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 Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:48 pm
The pain I feel
Day by day
I deal with it
And pray it'll go away
There's nobody but me
In this lonely house
No family, no friends,
And definetly no spouse
This loneliness
Eats at my heart
It's slowly but surely
Tearing my insides apart
I run to the razor
My only friend
I cut till I bleed
But not to the end
I cut down deep
I cut just a scratch
Then I burn myself
With a lighted match
I'm all alone
Nobody cares
Through my cuts and my tears
Still nobody is there
Maybe one day
When I'm gone and dead
They'll realize how cruel
Were the words that they said
And they'll live their life
In loneliness
And wish they could have
Gave me one loving kiss
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 1:01 am
Wow!!! This is really good and deep!!! I say you did a good job! I would love to read more. I don't like how you ended it though. I think there should have been more then what you would have wanted the one kiss. It has a lot of emotion in it though.
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