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 Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 10:57 am
These are just a few of my poems that I've written. They are all written about and for this girl I really like. She has seen all of them. I'm really shy and It's hard for me to even be posting these, considering she has been the only one I've shown them to...So here I go...Oh and Please give me some feedback.
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She actually looks happy. Her face is glowing. She's always smiling.
Her friends thought she was crazy. They had never seen her that happy.
Those were the days. The ones when she was truly happy.
When she felt nothing could go wrong.
Boy was she wrong. She couldn't have been more wrong.
Her world was about to fall apart. Everything she had once known was about to be pulled out from underneath her.
There was that one fateful night, when she felt like ending everything. But didn't.
She held on. And there was only one person that could keep her alive.
She held on to her. Never wanting to let her go.
After only a few days she was gone. Her grip had slipped and she was gone.
She couldn't believe her eyes. Never had she thought this day would come.
Her friend was gone, the only one to keep her going.
And now she was all alone.
Her friend moved on.
And she still felt alone.
All those nights passed, feeling depressed. Feeling like nothing could ever go right.
She still feels like this. But she hides it under a mask. And it seems to be working.
But for how long? How long can she hide under a mask?
Pretending everything is okay.
When she is really crying and dying more each day. She hopes no one will see.
She hopes to one day find someone that can make her as happy as she once was.
But she has her doubts. She doesn't believe she can ever be happy again.
Not truly happy, like she once was.
The thing she wants most is for someone to prove her wrong.
Someone to make her feel happy again, like nothing can ever go wrong.
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I'll post more as I get feedback from this one. And I'll be updating regularly.
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:17 am
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Fire burning in your eyes
Always telling all those lies
Always saying you’re all right
Never quite managing to win the fight
I really don’t care what you say
Things may never be the same
I can’t imagine a day without you
I yearn to say that I love you
Always hiding all that pain
Always smiling everyday
Even though you’re always smiling I know instead you’re really crying
But that doesn’t stop me from seeing the pain you’re really feeling
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:15 pm
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Love is gentle love is kind.
Love is patient love is blind.
Love is here love is there.
Love will follow everywhere.
Even if you cannot see love is growing constantly.
The person that you least expect yearns to be at your doorstep.
Just to show how much they care.
But frozen with that loving stare.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 3:24 pm
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Your eyes will sparkle in the light
Even when your hear may not
Open up and you might find
That one true thing that makes you shine
Even when you can't hold on
They've been there for you to help you on
Always waiting for you to find
That one true thing that makes you shine
Always wanting you to see
How much that you can truly be
Wanting to show you how much they care
But always to busy helping you find
That one true thing that makes you shine
Just for once I wish you'd see
How much you truly mean to me
Because with me you might just find
That one true thing that makes you shine
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