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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:23 am
I'm far from a poet, but I enjoy writing them anyway. So I thought I'd post a few.
My head’s vastly exploding Checkers are blinding me, Senses are assaulting me And I feel all over floating.
Hear as the winding road calls I want to wander off in this world Show in a new place until twirled I will wander until this world falls
The flowers speak, now hush The forest will be angered He will consume until served Your majesty is fed to crush
I’m sure your eyes would bulge, too. Mind adding my soul to your stew? And what if pigs flew? This stitching is sown a strew
There’s something terrifying in my voice It feels blocked by this sound Maybe it’s you it has found Are you happy with this silence by noise?
The flowers laugh at your silly gloating. Rainbows are choking out the light I never saw those colors so bright In this static, my head is exploding.
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His skin was cold-silver, emotionless His lips poignant, without things to confess Parallel beams shot sternly ahead Nobody met them, but ran instead
And then one day there was a girl Her eyes were ashen glints in whirl She put her small fingers on his shell He stood at rest, but it was she who fell.
Waved tresses bobbed as she avoided him His lack of feelings made her feelings grim And as she rested in her bed fast sleeping Her love for this machine was fast deepening
On a morning new, he vanished; disappeared Little was left of the thing she once revered Only three tarnished bolts, three rusty screws A locked tin box next to a self-cut robotic fuse
Her heart was broken, beating out of tempo A light from shiny silver was no longer aglow Writing a quick letter, the girl vanished as well Her funeral was silent except a lone bell
That night, her father found that box untouched There was a note inside, one he sadly clutched:
“I address the girl with eyes silver like me, My life was nothing but rust until I met thee. I must leave you, for your love I will never own I’d rather depart this life than live it alone.”
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Frostbite cut out your brains. Angels mourn the gangrene of your heart. You may rest in your bed. Your lies turned to maggots Eating at the dead flesh in your chest. Are you ill with your abuse? Are you sick with the torment you housed? The fire burns your lungs. Your mind’s jelly in that skull of plastic. All that powder born white Is now red with your blood. Does it suffocate you? Does it make you shake and shiver? Angels’ tears have dried Now they fly away leaving you There’s nothing left for you Nothing but your lies Nothing but your scars Nothing but the pain you caused And now as you rest in that bed With your brain jelly in that plastic head You’re too dead to yourself You’re too dead to let us pay Too dead to go away.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 1:32 pm
wow... i like the second...
The second is very "OUCH!"... very graphic and can make you feel things. The third is a bit more angry... But the second... awesome! heart
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 3:28 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 7:11 am
Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. mrgreen I agree with Missy. I like the second one but it is tragic. It has a futuristic Romeo and Juliet feel to it: a love that cannot be.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 7:48 am
I like them biggrin Nice job, Silvie! 4laugh
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:48 am
the second one just... wow... is has a line, a story... is great! eek heart
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 3:16 am
The third one is angry and teh second one has a strory the first one was really good. mrgreen
*claps for your poems* 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:14 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:14 am
*from the back of the audience he listens to the poet recite her poems.*
Wow! *claps*
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