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deidara4meYEAH

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 1:17 pm


i wrote this one to describe my crush hope u like it:
(NOTE: since it takes me a long time to type my poems they will be in lower case)

my heart it beats on and on,
every night the same old song.
it goes crazy once i see you,
also when i dream of us on the morning dew.

my dreams are filled with love and yearn,
your hurt casue my love to burn
but you won't know and you never will
because of you ill always kill!

ill kill forever till i get to you
then ill try something new.
ill torment and torture till you squeal
my brain turning like a hamster wheel

but then ill wake from my weird little dream
thinkng of things, of plots to sceam.
ill move my mouth saying your name
moving out quicly, just as it came.

ill only love you once and forever
my love won't seece not once, not ever
i love you boy dont you see?
don't you care to look don't you care to see?

of course you don't, you dont care
you never look or stop to stare.
youll always look at them
like they are a special flower and you are their stem.

but you will look someday i know you will.
because ill be the sickness and youll be the pill
you will cure my love sick heart
so never again will we be apart.

i love you but youll never be named
for liking you ill always be blamed.
but youll never know it at leats i hope,
my love for you will never cope

why wont you love me?
like the sand loves the sea.
in my dreams you are the sun
but then they're all over and its all done.

this is like some disease
one that noone has that noone sees.
this is driving me insane. its making me sick.
you will always be my prize pick.

the sight of your smile makes me quiver,
the smell of you makes me shiver.
youll be the blanket to cover me up
and ill be the shivering cold little pup.

"come on" ill say as i aproach
but i shouldnt worry as you lift me up in the horse coach.
youll lift me up and twirl me around
like there isnt a care, there isn't a sound.
your kiss will feel like youve known me forever
and then well both live happily ever after.

THE END!
PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 8:08 am


any body? hello any body out there!? 3nodding

deidara4meYEAH


nyalk512

PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:34 am


I love it!!!
PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 6:08 am


thanks! i love urs i read on ur topic. blaugh

deidara4meYEAH


deidara4meYEAH

PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 3:31 pm


heres another one:

KNOCKING
Knock, knock,
its coming closer.
knock, knock,
its icey breath is at my shoulder.
knock, knock,
it feels so near.
knock, knock
its what i fear.
knock, knock,
wat is that sound?
knock, knock
its coming around.
KNOCK, KNOCK,
its at my window!
KNOCK, KNOCK,
i see its evil shadow.
KNOCK, KNOCK,
what should i do?
knock, knock,
i wish it would give me a clue!
knock, knock,
its going away.
knock, knock,
but i really think its here to stay.
knock, knock,
OH GOD ITS COMING BACK!
knock, knock
with its evil it does not lack!
wait a secound there is no more knocking,
i think maybe its stopped the mocking!
KNOCK, KNOCK,
ITS BACK, WHY WON'T IT JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!?
KNOCK, KNOCK,
i know why. it wants me stoned.
KNOCK, KNOCK,
ITS IN MY ROOM!
KNOCK, KNOCK,
now my terror is begining to bloom.
KNOCK, KNOCK,
it chopped off my head
knock, knock,
now im the one who is dead! twisted twisted twisted im a twisted sister! twisted twisted
PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:23 am


Nice poem twisted I'm evil twisted Muah! check my journal and vote on the poll I madeon my poems. PIZZAAA!!!!!

nyalk512


deidara4meYEAH

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 11:01 am


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