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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:47 am


PROLOGUE


When the first swarm came to Earth, we didn't know what the heck hit us. The skies went dark as they filled with huge swarms of alien bugs, that we now call Manti. Manti consume human DNA to survive and power their fleet. Soon whole cities were consumed, and harvested by those bugs. Once harvested, infected humans became dangerous mutants turning on their own by attacking humans in battle. Fleeing into the Solar Colonies, our species grew scattered and very weak. By the time that the second arrived, the Earth was barely fit for human life. Now the second Swarm is well underway. The Manti have taken over earth and turned it into their home world. If there is ever a third swarm, the human race will not survive. The Manti threat must soon be eliminated if the human race is to try to survive.
Human resistance is led by a coalition of galactic troops known as GSA, ( Galactic Star gate Authority). Headquartered at Cydonia Base, Mars GSA troops cross the galaxy using a network of star gates to attack bug outposts. Only bold GSA Defenders, the elite pilots of the Galactic Star gate Authority, stand in the way of human extinction. No treaties can be made, and no peace can be reached in this war.
Manti have hijacked Earth as their new home world. It's not looking good for mankind. This is where teams will start to fight to the death, in order to reclaim earth from the Manti scum.



i'll post the rest through here one by one. the other way, "all in one post" hurts my eyes, so that would probably hurt whoevers reading it. so yeah one by one it is. also i know this has maybe some spelling, and punctation errors, not formated right, and maybe some other things. but its just a rough draft of it all. its not the final copy so can you tell me what to work on, or fix and not yell at me about? that's all i ask. thank you.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:49 am


Chapter 1: The Beginning


The year is 3579, and the planet earth that we humans once lived on is now nothing more than a death trap. The enemy that we call the Manti, who are alien bugs learn and found out how to get past us. It seems that every battle we go into, the Manti learn more of our weaknesses. Now we are hiding on mars ready to launch an attack. The ship they are on is called memory. This is the biggest space ship that the humans have ever made. “Clear the area! Everyone away from the docking bays if u want to live and not be burned by my thrusters” said John. “I’m going to take the fight to those Manti scum right now. Memory open the Star Gate to Earth now!” “Yes sir Star Gate to Earth is opened” 2 minutes after John left, Pilot in training Steve complains to Commander Adams “Sir you should let me go after the Manti! Heck I could fly circles around them.” “Steve shut up and go back to training, we’ll call u if we need you for an emergency. That’s why you must keep training, cause if we do need you we want you to be ready to go” Said Commander Adams. Mean while by The Moon John has been scanning and he sent this to GSA headquarters “Sir I think my scanners are messed up. I’m reading that the Moon has an atmosphere.” John get out of there now! If there’s an atmosphere… John the Manti are coming and they’ll kill you! Get out of there now, that’s an order!” Said Commander Adams, and Memory. “Ahhhhhhh….. There everywhere, keep the gate open, I should be Ahhhhhh……. able to make it….. HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!” “John? John can you here me? Wait something’s coming out of the Star Gate! Ohhhh no…. he didn’t make it. Memory call up Kyoto.” “Why sir?” “Because I believe that she’ll be able to do just as good as her brother John.” “Yes sir.” “Kyoto please come to the main bay. I’m sorry to say this but your brother John has just been killed by the Manti.” “Kyoto?” “ Tell the commander that I’ll help kill those bugs so I can avenge my brother.” Commander Adams “ Kyoto I know what you want to do. Just go through your last two training Missions, and you then can join me in the fight.” “ Yes I understand Sir.” Kyoto then leaves to complete her last two training missions so she can go avenge her brother, and help save all Mankind.

Master Ish


Master Ish

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:51 am


Chapter 2: The Training Begins

After Kyoto found out that her brother John was killed by the evil Manti scum, she had vowed that she would avenge her brother, and try to help save her home planet Earth. But before she could even begin her revenge and goals she had to complete her last two training missions. The training center is on our farthest planet Pluto because, if something happened the new recruits wouldn’t be harmed. So after Kyoto had got into her ship the defender 7, she went through the star gate portal to Pluto for her last two missions. Her first mission was to fly through 30 star gates under thirty seconds. Her first five times were 00”50”79, 00”45”34, 00”39”28, 00”35”91, and 00”30”01. They said that she could go on to mission number two because she improved dramatically. But she told them that she would get this mission under 30 seconds. They were just about to let her go when commander Adams had call on the base. He told Kyoto that if she hurried up on her missions and completed them nicely she could make it to the party. The party was being held because some faces wouldn’t be seen again so everyone could hang out for one last time before the attack on earth. The party was being held on the mars base, and nobody knew what would happen after the first few hours of the party. But before we get to the party Kyoto rushed threw the course at hyper speed since she new the course so well. After she passed through the last star gate, and landed to find out her time it was just silence. She said “well what’s my time? Well is anyone going to speak up!” The training instructor said “ well Mrs. Kyoto your time was incredible! Not only did you beat your goal, but you also beat the record for this course. The record was 00”25”35, and you got 00”19”27. Kyoto you may go to your second mission now, and also congratulations on your time.” It was a half an hour before the party would begin, and a half an hour before the incident would happen. Kyoto’s second mission was target practice. She had to demolish some buildings that would be tore down while they were fighting the manti, so instead of them demolishing them they decided that Kyoto could use them as target practice. Her 4 weapons on her ship were a five barrel machine gun, a 4 sided laser cannon that can cut through almost anything, a charging cannon that when it was charged all the way it could take out 10 to 16 in one blast, also it doesn’t harm you at all, and the last weapon is the 5 cannon homing missiles. Also the defender ship comes with an advanced shield that lasts for 3 minuets and can be used 3 times before it needs to be recharged. After she had destroyed the buildings she was going to the star gate to go back to mars when everything had happened. The party incident, and something had even happened at the training base. Kyoto wasn’t even sure what was going on until it was almost to late.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:54 am


Chapter 3: Racing Against Time

Kyoto was just about to go through the star gate when all of a sudden she seen three Manti. She just thought they were more targets, so she killed all of three of them. Then she got a message from Memory saying “Kyoto hurry up and save all of the human colonists, because if the manti swarm that’s coming at you gets them they’ll get a lot stronger, faster, and harder to kill. Also hurry up over there because the Manti are at the Mars base where the party was and they’re attacking the base severely hard. If you don’t hurry Pluto can be taken over, and mars can be destroyed. Kyoto?” “just great now it’s a race against time, and if I don’t succeed we can lose one base or two. Memory I’ll be to the mars base as soon as I’m done with who’s here. So how many colonists are there anyways?” “There are 3 ahead of you, 3 by the star gate, and one by the buildings you destroyed earlier. But listen Kyoto you can only pick up 3 colonists at a time right now. Well Kyoto good luck because you’ll need it.” Kyoto saves the first 3 colonists that are by the star gate. She then drops them off at a small safe spot where the Manti can’t go because of a Manti proof shield. She then goes and saves the next 3 colonists that were in front of her earlier, and drops them off. “What is it Memory? “Look behind you!” “Huh? Oh no! The Manti have the seventh colonist almost eaten! Hang on, shields full power, thrusters at full blast. You will die right here right now you manti scum! AHHHH….? Where did the colonist go, and where’s the Manti?” “Well my good friend Kyoto, you saved me just in time.” “Huh? You mean I saved you and killed that Manti with a shield ram! Thank god, now let me drop you off cause I got to get to Mars quickly.” “Hang on there, you can’t just charge in there after using some of your shield and ammo on those other Manti. Give us two minuets and we’ll have you ready to go kill those manti.” “Ok” back at the base on Mars, the battle was fierce, people were dying quickly because they weren’t ready, and each time a manti died 3 more came to take that ones place. Kyoto sent them a message saying she’d be there in at least three minuets or less. After she sent the message the defender ship was recharged, repaired, and ready to fight. Kyoto quickly powered up her ship and had them open the star gate to Mars’s base. Before she left she told them to put some tanks, and missile crawlers out so they could defend themselves incase there was another attack. After that she went through the star gate ready for the next big battle. The battle which was out of hand, and was a deadly place for anyone to enter. That is where Kyoto finally learns what it means to defend the human race.

Master Ish


Master Ish

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:55 am


Chapter 4: The Battle On Mars


When Kyoto’s ship was repaired by the colonists she saved, and before she left for the battle that was taking place on Mars she said to the colonists “put up some Tanks, and Missile Crawlers incase while I’m gone another attack happens.” They took her advice and set up. After that she went through the star gate with weapons blazing, and shields ready to be put up incase of an attack as soon as she entered the bloody battle field. When she arrived she seen over seven-hundred Manti or more. She got told by Memory just to stay alive, and kill as many as she could. She had noticed that there were six plasma cannons without their power supplies, so she looked on her radar seeing where they were taken. She seen one by a cliff, three guarded by twenty Manti, two guarded by land Manti that we call Widows, or Manti Crawlers. The other one was being guarded by a Manti called a Scorpion, or The Carrier. She decided to go for the three guarded by the twenty Manti. She had opened up the five barrel machine gun. She creped closer to them, with her fingers on the firing controls. When she got close enough she slammed her fingers on the firing buttons, aimed, and watched the Manti blow up into tiny little pieces. She then took each power supply to its generator. The plasma cannons then activated themselves and shot any Manti that came into view. Kyoto “that’s three down and only four to go. She went towards the cliff area for the next one, and was wondering why enemies were coming up on her radar. She then realized that it was a trap, and put one of her shields up and rushed in there taking the power supply, and then dropping it off at the generator. She had a minute until her first shield would dropped so she hurried back with her charged blaster fully charged. She seen that they were coming towards her so she hit the center of the swarm, and when the blast hit she seen a huge blue flash. Then when the flash ended, there was not even a molecule left of them. She had to wait for the beam to cool off for a moment so she went towards the Scorpion, with the four barrel laser cannon. She charged right at it, and started cutting it up. It took two minuets, but after that it tried to escape and go destroy some of the plasma cannons. Kyoto followed it, and started shooting it with her five barrel machine gun. Before it got there she blew it into five pieces that imploded when the hit the ground. She went back to where it was and got the power supply and put it into the generator. She just needed two more, but she was no match for three Widows. She decided that she would charge her beam up, then put the shield up before she got there so she’d have more time to destroy them. When she got there the beam only killed one of them, but two were left and her beam cannon would take some time to cool down. So instead she said ‘looks like its going to be a long fight now, so I guess I’ll chop one up with my laser cannon, and kill the other one with my charge beam if it gets ready in time I’ll kill the other one. But if my shield drops before both of them are dead I’ll die almost instantly since they’re so strong. Well like Commander Adams said “ not all of you will come back here alive. You got to take chances, and risks in order to save what you love.” “Well Commander Adams I now understand what you meant. So I guess its all or nothing now. Widows its time you die!”
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:57 am


Chapter 5: Kyoto’s Decision “All Or Nothing”
Two Widows, One Defender, and One Shield that could go down at anytime. Kyoto had a 35% chance of making it out of there “alive,” and a 65% chance of “dieing.” But she knew if she didn’t stop them, then probably nobody would. “Well it’s all up to me now. Laser Cannons full power! I hope that I don’t use all of my power up and drain my shield. But it’s the only way so I’ll just have to risk it all.” While Kyoto was slowly, and desperately trying to destroy both Widows, Commander Adams and what was left of the people at the base, were trying to get away in a GSA Transporter Ship. While they were making their escape, Kyoto’s Four Plasma Cannons were protecting them for only a short period of time. After they got out of range for the Cannons they were on there own, all they had was a shield, and two heavy Machine Guns to defend themselves. And they were doing pretty darn good at the time, they left Cannon range. All they had to do was survive and get to the Star Gate Portal, so they could escape. Also what was on the ship was a tank, a tank that if someone would use to help save everyone else, but in the process have a huge 90% chance of not coming back alive. Now where Kyoto was fighting, she had just finally cut through and killed one Widow. But her shield could drop at any second, and her big charge beam was going to be down for another two minutes. So she went and switched to her homing missiles. Those didn’t take up hardly any power, so she used them so she could conserve some energy. She had 35 shots and she used every last one of them. It still stood there with still ¾ of life left. She decided to use her machine gun, for a little while hoping that the shield would last that long anyways. After she got a message from Memory stating that her Charge Beam was now functional again, she quickly started to charge it up. Then after she started a red light started to blink within her ship. WARNING DAMAGE ON SHIELD IS CRITICAL. IT WILL POWER DOWN WITH IN T-MINUS 30 SEC. “Shoot I need at least 35 to 40 seconds for the beam to be strong enough to destroy it! If I had some more time it would be a piece of cake, and if I run away it’ll start moving towards the base and destroy it! Heck its already to close to the base right now! I guess, I just guess I’ll have to take a risk and keep charging the beam and hope that my ship can survive a few Widow blasts. If I make it out of here alive, I will never forget this day. I’ll also learn that I can’t do the easy tasks first and then take on the big one, that’s gotten twice as big from when it first became a threat.” SHIELD HAS TEN SEC. BEFORE IT POWERS DOWN. 15 SEC. BEFORE CHARGE CANNON IS READY TO FIRE. “Well looks like its all or nothing now. I guess my decision is made. I’ll stay and destroy this Widow. I’ll DESTROY IT ONCE AND FOR ALL!” SHIELD IS NOW DOWN. “ just got to hold in there for a few more seconds. Three, Two, One. WARNING DAMAGE IS CRITICAL! Here we GO!” All you could see was a huge white flash. Memory “Kyoto are you ok? Kyoto Please Speak to me!” Life readings says that she’s unconscious. She was in her ship knocked out cold, and nobody could help her. All anyone could do was pray that she would live through this battle, and not be attacked or abducted.

Master Ish


Mommi
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 10:06 am


Thanks for the story. mrgreen
I'm just checking on this sub. ninja
I will read it soon. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 7:50 pm


Mommi
Thanks for the story. mrgreen
I'm just checking on this sub. ninja
I will read it soon. sweatdrop

no problem! its ok. i still got plenty more to post up here as soon as i get it outta this stupid folder of mine. its being a pain. sweatdrop take your time though. there's no need to hurry. its not gonna go anywhere. ^^

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Cpt.JackSparrow

PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 7:05 am


good job
PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 5:41 am


Cpt.JackSparrow
good job
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 4:59 pm


I n n a h
Cpt.JackSparrow
good job
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I really like it. xd
PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 4:41 pm




*glomps* You finally posted it and I'm finally here!! wink Shhhhhhhhh... ttyl, ok?


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Mommi
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:31 pm


mrgreen Good job. Thanks for posting! mrgreen
PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:45 pm


Hey thanks everyone! i'll be posting some more up tonight. i'm glad you all like it! mrgreen

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Master Ish

PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:55 pm


Chapter 6: Kyoto’s Past
Kyoto was trapped within her ship. She couldn’t get out or do anything because she was unconscious. All anyone could have done was pray, and hope that she would awaken soon enough to escape the battle field alive. While she was unconscious she was having a flash back of her entire life. When she was five years old, her brother went and got her something she never had dreamed of getting. She got a chance to go with him to the Memory ship prototype. She had always wanted to go there with her brother, and her brother had made her biggest wish she had come true. She even got to meet the Commander Adams at that time as well. Commander Adams said: One day Kyoto you’ll be here with all of us. You, your brother, and me will all be here at the same time one day.” But little did Kyoto know that Commander Adams was actually her father that disappeared three years ago. She only knew her father when she was just a little baby, so she doesn’t really remember him at all. Her brother and Commander Adams had an agreement that “when the time comes for her to join us, will be the time she gets to meet her father again.” Her mother had taken care of her everyday when her brother went to the Memory ship prototype. She also had known about Kyoto’s fathers disappearance, but she agreed not to tell her daughter as well. When Kyoto had turned 18 years old, and after she finished school she got a certificate to go to GSA Academy. When she got there she was told to start training, so she could help them out whenever something could happen. She had been training, for three years and she had just about finished it when the first Manti wave had arrived. Nobody was prepared, and earth was sent into turmoil. Kyoto was on Pluto doing her training, when she got called back to the newly finished ship Memory. Memory had called Kyoto and said “Kyoto stop your training and come to GSA Headquarters.” (AKA the ship Memory.) Kyoto thought that she had finished her training and would be joining her brother. But she was wrong, dead wrong. When she had arrived to GSA Headquarters, she was told by Commander Adams that her brother was dead. Also she found out that her mother was safe, safe on Pluto. She was happy her Mother was ok, but her heart was broken when she found out that her only brother had been killed. That’s when she made her vow to Memory, Commander Adams, Earth, her Mother, and her Brother that she would help stop these Manti once and for all, and avenge her Brother. Even when she was on the Pluto base doing her last two training missions, she never got to see her Mother, because she was in the safest place that they had on the base. They didn’t want Kyoto to loose her only other sibling that she knew. After that there was the Pluto attack that she took care of, and then the Mars battle where she was still there unconscious. Her life had flashed against her, and after it was all done she slowly awakened. “Huh? What happened?” Memory ”KYOTO LOOK OUT!” A Manti had came out of nowhere and it was charging at Kyoto. Kyoto didn’t even know what was just about to happen. All anyone new was two hits and she’d die in a fiery explosion. A fiery explosion exactly, the same type of one her Brother had died in.
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