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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 3:05 pm
Player Information—
Player Name: Ninja Kronos Player’s Character Number: First Character Personal Information—
Character Name: Shirotora, Zakuri,Zaku,Tora
Character Genetics:The Shirotora Family
Character Picture: I'll try to make one..
Affiliation: Village Hidden in the Leaves, Konohagakure
Personality: His view on life to let things take place and not to disturb the natural order of things, Needless to say his personality is lazy and laid back. Many think he's a slacker (Which he kind of is) He thinks the things he needs to do sometimes are instead, useless. Not many people know,but he is really smart as a person and in battle, What counters this is his inability not to stop making up the weirdest theories..Still, Most of the time he keeps a positive attitude, unless being annoying/annoyed.His values lie with honor in battle, respecting his father and trying his best most of the time. He's a natural taijustu nin, mainly because his father trains him, and better yet sometimes even lets him train with his sword, "Zen"Despite his training with his father which also disciplines him he'll flirt if he wants to. A respectful person, if you're a friend... Likes and Dislikes: Likes-
Attractive Girls Boobs (!) Any combination of the two (Which there is only one..) Flirting Winning Analyzing Situations Acting oblivious.. Being obnoxious Questioning higher-ups.
Dislikes- People who copy him Fake personalities Losing Being out-smarted Record and Background:
The perfect life, If you exclude mediocre grades,a bad kid (seemingly) and last but most definitely not least, A life without a mother. His child's life was the ideal one, a mother, a father and a good home to live in..His mother, a retired shinobi, and his father, A Ronin (-Mentorless Samurai-) we're unlikely to kill..But something was going to happen that would change his life.....(Flashback?) When his father was younger and a more famous ronin, an assassin tried to kill him, over and over...His father decided the next time would be the last, his father utterly disgraced him in that battle, This assassin's every last bit of honor was stripped that day, He swore his revenge no matter how long it took. Now Sixteen years later, He is happily married for twelve years with a Seven old son, Zakuri... Zakuri as a child, he was matured for his age, not only that he was very determined to reach his goals, and he did well in the academy.Then this assassin's revenge begun..One fateful day when Zakuri's father took him out to dinner for good grades, the assassin poisoned the mother, slowly and painfully killing her. The father and son got back not soon afterwhen the assassin was still in the house looking for the father. The assassin's face curled into a dark smile lurking over the mother's dead body, he attempted another poison dart at the son but the father quickly unsheathed his blade he stepped foward and stabbed the assassin, dead in his heart in one swift move. He whispered in his ear "I should have killed you a long time ago." The father sheathed his blade and the assassin fell to his knees, then toppled over. The father turned to the boy and looked at him searching his mind for words..He couldn't say anything..All he could do was look into his eyes helpless to his mother's death..The boy slowly walked to his room, looked back at his father and bowed, when he turned back around a tear dropped to the ground almost echoing throughout the father's mind. Now years later, hard work and training with his father got him to where he is.The Slacker shinobi Zakuri Shirotora is on the rise.. Character Physical Figures—
Ninja Rank: Academy student
Age: 13 Height: 5'10" Weight: 150 pounds Gender: Male
Ethnicity:Negro-Mongoloid hybrid.
Eye Color: His eyes are green, sometimes when he gets pissed that take on a more cat-like appearance (sp?) with a thing black pupil going through the middle.
Hair Color: His hair is a natural silky black, it reaches about three inches below his ears.
Hair Style/Accessories: He has a white green headband on right above his forehead making the tip of his hair spikey, and the back a little spikey, Facial Accessories:
Clothing:He wears a green reverse- zipper jacket, you connect it at the top. he wears it open so the bottom is closed, the green color compliments his eyes and his jacket. He wears a black undershirt. His pants are semi-loose green with black lines on the side. Character Statistics—
Level: 0 Experience Accumulation:0 Stats:600 Health- 75 Stamina- 80 Chakra- 55 Taijutsu- 60 Endurance- 45 Ninjutsu- 40 Genjutsu- 0 Resistance- 60 Speed- 80 Accuracy- 60 Evasion- 45 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Character Abilities—
Skill Points: *2 Skills: Name: Gifted [Taijustu] Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Ranks: 1 (May only take one per Stat) Cost: -1
Name: Gifted [Speed] Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Ranks: 1 (May only take one per Stat) Cost: -1
Name: Gifted [Stamina] Effect: When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). Ranks: 1 (May only take one per Stat) Cost: -1
Name: Quick Learner Effect: It takes 3 less JP required to learn a new technique. Must always spend at least 1 point Ranks: 3 Cost: -3
Name: Hemophobia Effect: User is Stunned for one post after first blood appears in the fight Rank: 1 Cost: +1
Name: Self-Defense Effect: Opponents always act first, no matter what. If both have Self-Defense, then proceed as normal. Rank: 1 Cost: +2
Name: Pervert (Pick Gender) Effect: Whenever you battle an opponent of your prefered gender choice, you lose your first turn in combat. Rank: 2 (Male and Female) Cost: +1
Skills Learned: None
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Character Techniques and Jutsus—
Academy Jutsu-- (These are Jutsu that you begin with. If you have Sealed Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, you may not be able to use some of these)
Name: Bushin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu/Genjutsu [Void] Chakra: 15 per Bushin Damage: N/A Effects: Allows user to create an semi-illusionary duplicate of one's self, up to five at E rank. Expand the Target replacement range by 5% per Bushin you have active. Description: Through channeling one's chakra, Bushin allows for a character to create illusionary yet exact duplicates of one's self.
Name: Kawarimi No Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu [Void] Chakra: 15 Damage: N/A Effects: Dodges one E-Rank Jutsu or Basic attack. Description: Replacing his or her body by using Kawarimi on a nearby object, the ninja swiftly flees and dodges the attack.
Name: Henge No Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu/Genjutsu [Void] Chakra: 15 Damage: N/A Effects: Allows user to change their their appearance. Upon taking a blow the user reverts back to normal. If this person turns into an ally or something of that sort, both are given the same benefits as a single Bunshin. Upon a close miss(1%-5%), the corresponding target is hit instead. Description: Bending light and changing their form with it, a ninja performs a basic transformation.
Techniques/Jutsu Learned-- (This is where you will place all jutsu you learn from a Sensei of some sort. These jutsu do not count towards your 'jutsu slots available')
Other Techniques/Jutsu-- Name: Shadow Leaf Dance (Kage Buyou) Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Cost: 40 Damage: 20 Effect: The opponents skips his next response phase. Description: A technique used to attach the user to their opponents shadow. Once done, the victim is in a vulnerable position to a more damaging attack. Such as Initial Lotus or less advanced attacks, like the Lion Combo. Points: 10
Character Equipment and Inventory—
Weaponry: (This is where you will place all weaponry)
-Main Weapon: none -Sub Weapon: Kunai
Items: (This is where you will keep track of all misc. items)
-Pouch: 4 Shuriken, 4 Kunai, 2 Senbon Needles -Items in Vault: N/A -Money on hand: $200
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~Update Log~ Leveled up/Exp Earned: None +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
~Mission Log~
Rank D: 0 Rank C: 0 Rank B: 0 Rank A: 0 Rank S: 0
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:01 pm
I say theres something missing. Like not enough information and it seems to repetive.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 7:13 pm
I say you should look threw it again and change afew things, its quite hard to read. Plus about the clan, im not sure if you talked to nikkeru about that new clan....so I wont approve this intil im notified you have permission for your clan. And your missing alot of details that need to be filled out.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 7:28 pm
True, I think I'm gonna delete the clan thing, I wasn't going to make it like really major clan, just like a family.
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