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 Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 1:21 pm
Hey Everyone!
Sorry i haven't been around lately, its been like 2 months but i fell in love heart ...didn't work out...sick b*****d....and now i am back. Well i drew this sketch of this girls eye and it was crying and her tears were screaming and saying all the things that had gone wrong and then she was diving into her tear. it took me ages to do. and i wrote a little poem along with it....
Dive into my tears
Tear into my thoughts
Thought you knew my screams
But your screams ruined my heart.
This is going to be in a series that i am doing, like i have one with a girl slitting her wrist with pretty much the same concept in blood but if anyone has any ideas or small poems that they would like me to think of some drawings for don't be afraid to ask.
M
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Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 3:56 pm
I'm wondering if I am supposed to laugh at how you say "I fell in heart ...didn't work out...sick b*****d..." The wording seems amusing.
Oh wait, not critiquing that, sorry...Nice little poem...Is there a way you can post the drawing with it? I think you add the drawing into the post to go with the poem. Why not? A little visual art to go with the writing wont threaten our idea of being a "writing guild" I dont think 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 7:00 am
I feelng pretty low and this four line poem doesn't help... crying crying crying
It's okay... it is... crying
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Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 8:28 am
Lol, I'll try to get my drawing up, I'll have to put it up at my friends house becuase she has a scanner...in fact she's a really good writer and pretty active in Gaia, i don't know why she's in here.
As for the falling in love thing....If u so feel inclined as to laugh please do becuase i actaully laughed when he dumped me (he dumped me in spanish and i take french, what a looser right?!). Well as for Tinky (Moi) I must go work on some lyrics.
Are those able to be on here also?
Super Tink.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 8:35 am
I like how much meaning you manage to convey in the poem with so few words, but I'm not keen on how short it is. It just feels to me that another stanza should come before it or something...
You said that it's going to be in a series that you're doing - are you going to post that here? I'll look out for it, if you intend to.
I'll look forward to seeing your picture, if you can get it uploaded!
I know I've not been in the guild very long and don't know much about it, but I personally would consider written lyrics acceptable as a form of writing.
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 6:48 am
Hey, is it possible to post pictures from paint? I tried but it won't work... confused
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