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 Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 6:30 am
This is where we can share poems, stories, excerpts, etc. from things we have written.
If you love to write, this is the place for you!!
cool
Start writing!
Also, you can discuss why you like to write here, too.
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 6:53 pm
Hello. A soft voice chirped in her psyche. The voice was the essence of a young boy. The voice sounded all throughout curious, along with a strong bolt of happiness to meet her, and a surprising sadness reverberated in his tone. She bolted straight awake, eyes wide with alarm. This was unquestionably a new guest in her mind. She felt the other conscience brush against hers, and retreated from it by putting up diamond-hard shields against the intruder. She was not new to the sensation of a trespasser and was educated callously in the magic guilds in Ellesmera Apparently, even putting up that tough a mental force would not bar this trespasser as he somehow “crossed the threshold” through those safeguards.
...so how'd u think?
scale of one to ten.
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 7:00 am
Jaychoi Hello. A soft voice chirped in her psyche. The voice was the essence of a young boy. The voice sounded all throughout curious, along with a strong bolt of happiness to meet her, and a surprising sadness reverberated in his tone. She bolted straight awake, eyes wide with alarm. This was unquestionably a new guest in her mind. She felt the other conscience brush against hers, and retreated from it by putting up diamond-hard shields against the intruder. She was not new to the sensation of a trespasser and was educated callously in the magic guilds in Ellesmera Apparently, even putting up that tough a mental force would not bar this trespasser as he somehow “crossed the threshold” through those safeguards. ...so how'd u think? scale of one to ten. 9! That was really good writing. 3nodding Very descriptive and simply great!
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:17 pm
Thanks Otulissa!
u know, i'd really like to hear some of your writing, so i could give it a great grade, u want? dramallama
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:38 am
Jaychoi Thanks Otulissa! u know, i'd really like to hear some of your writing, so i could give it a great grade, u want? dramallama Umm...Okay. What kind of writing? Poetry, excerpt from an essay, excerpt from a novel, a short story, an RP sample, music lyrics...??
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 8:25 am
hmm... excerpt from a novel, preferably from fantasy, though it amazes me how you get into so many types of writing! xp
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 11:25 am
Jaychoi hmm... excerpt from a novel, preferably from fantasy, though it amazes me how you get into so many types of writing! xp LOL! smile Here is one: Sarah crept along the ground, shocked to be in this horrific place. The girl closed her eyes tight as she crawled behind a bush, hiding from everything in this harsh world. Her breath caught in her throat, as she suddenly realized that she was breathing heavily and rather loudly. Sarah's eyelids fluttered open and she examined her surroundings. Then, there was a fantastic flash of light and Sarah screamed.
No sound emerged from her lips.
She spun around, standing up now. The light seemed to be coming out of the sky, like a plane crashing down from an explosion. Her eyes widened as she tottered closer to the gleaming orb of light that was shattered upon the dirt-strewn ground. She leaned in closer, and she felt a sudden chill down her spine. She recognized the orb of light as something she had seen many dimensions ago...
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:32 pm
...WHOA...
if that was a book, i'd like to buy it please!
10! u made that whole scenario seem like something would happen to keep you on the edge. it made u feel like u were standing right beside sarah, watching as she headed toward that single orb of mystery.
Anyways, it was great and i'd love to hear a lot more of it. Maybe u cud P.M.? dramallama
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 2:36 pm
Jaychoi ...WHOA... if that was a book, i'd like to buy it please! 10! u made that whole scenario seem like something would happen to keep you on the edge. it made u feel like u were standing right beside sarah, watching as she headed toward that single orb of mystery. Anyways, it was great and i'd love to hear a lot more of it. Maybe u cud P.M.? dramallama Thanks !! Actually, this one is kind of an "old" novel if you know what I mean...LOL I mean, I wrote it a few years ago.
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 2:41 pm
xp wud u like to hear some more of the story in that girls and the strangers interaction cuz i cud p. m. if u'd like
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 5:54 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 3:29 pm
...this is very lonely.......................................................
but i do like to talk to u otulissa, ur a great writer
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 1:53 pm
Jaychoi ...this is very lonely....................................................... but i do like to talk to u otulissa, ur a great writer Thank you very much, Jaychoi! ^_^ You are a great writer, too! 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 3:52 pm
mrgreen mrgreen mrgreen
aww thanks, but you're too nice razz
...tho is anibody else interested in sharing pieces of writing????????????
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 1:23 pm
Jaychoi mrgreen mrgreen mrgreen aww thanks, but you're too nice razz ...tho is anibody else interested in sharing pieces of writing???????????? LOL...I don't think so
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