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 Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 10:41 am
Carry me away on a summer's breeze
To a distant land where my heart wont freeze.
Show me the place where young stars are born
Where they dance in a trance 'till the night is worn.
Away from sorrow, away from pain
Waiting for my heart to come back to you again.
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Oooh, I'm just getting drippingly soppy now xD
Edit: Sorry, a typo. I put 'sorry insted of sorow lmao xD
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 11:29 am
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:29 am
That was really good! It's not the typical romance type of poetry everyone thinks! It was amazing! Write more! It's really interesting, you have a great storyline!
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 3:38 am
Why thank you smile This poem was not something from my usual line of work... I usually write quirky short poems to amuse little kids.. but sure I'll write more xD
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