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Kage-sama-dono

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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:04 am

I just wanted to try a sound affect.

Drop, splat
Drop, splat
Everything you hear is
drop, splat.
It's the tears I have shedded,
tears of the blood that was embedded.

Drop, splat
Drop, splat
Everything you see is
drop, splat.
It's the rain that is flowing,
rain of blood that I was bestowing.

Drop, splat
Drop, splat
Everything in sight is
drop, splat.
The image of you making the
drop, splat.
Before your hands
is where I stand.
Then it's all,
drop, splat.

Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:36 am

That was really good! I like that you're trying to use different types of poetry! Go Ayane-chan! Fighting!

Yuki-PUNK

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Kage-sama-dono

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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:37 am

You sound like my teacher, except the last part. Aja, aja fighting!

Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:38 am

Shush! Me need to use different types of poetry too, I might get into couplets or ballads... I dunno... Oh well! Aja aja fighting!

Yuki-PUNK

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Kage-sama-dono

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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:43 am

Ahh... well anyways... is the Aja aja fighting from Full House? I forgot.

Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:47 am

Kage-sama-dono

Ahh... well anyways... is the Aja aja fighting from Full House? I forgot.

A LOT of Korean people say that so I wouldn't just say it's from Full House... But yeah... most... actually... it's just a Korean thing... just like how Haruko says "ay sus" so much... it's just part of the nationality! Damn... I gotta learn how to explain better!

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Kage-sama-dono

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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:47 am

It's fine. I understand. Anyways I'm not some hothead.

Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:50 am

Kage-sama-dono

It's fine. I understand. Anyways I'm not some hothead.

LOL I'm the hot head! I'll call ya when I get my phone, hopefully tomorrow cuz I mah get mad at me mum again if she not givin me mah phone by tomorrow! Just keep writing luv! Me would ALWAYS criticize it if you need a critique! And I won't go any easier on you cuz I luv you! But amazingly, you've improved from your earlier poems to the poems you have now! Good job!

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Kage-sama-dono

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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 3:18 am

Yay!

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