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This is a side project of Plat's. DO NOT expect it to be completed any time soon as he is not focusing fully on it as he would rather polish off Ragweed and extend on his profile.

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NAME Breine Nowak
GENDER Male
AGE
RACE Duszek
HOMETOWN Where was your character born? If it's somewhere you created yourself, please include a brief write-up that we can include in our Nations section.
OCCUPATION This is probably just guild member/adventurer, but you can mention what you used to do prior to joining the guild.

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APPEARANCE
Breine like most Duszek is taller than an average human at around 6' with long legs and a thin but delicately muscled torso. Breine weighs in at a fragile weight of only 130 pounds. However Breine is not underweight rather he has next to no fat on him, his light weight never really causes him any problems as his style of fighting does not rely on brute force but more on attack the foe from range and dodging when the enemy gets too close.
Breine is almost obsessive about his appearance and looks after his skin very well and will avoid spending any unnecessary time in the sun, and moisturising his skin regually to keep it from drying out.

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PERSONALITY
Intolerant, Insulting, Presumptuous, Frank, Could be called Beauty Obsessed.

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HISTORY
This is the section where you tell us what your character went through to get to where they are now! This section need not be monumentally long, but we definitely need to know how they ended up taking an adventurer's lifestyle and why they chose to audition for the Asterion League.
COMMON KNOWLEDGE
To avoid players using OOC information ICly, this is where you should list out the sort of thing that guild members would likely find out about your character through word of mouth. In your character's early days within the League, this could be as simple as where they hail from. This section will likely grow as the character spends more time in the guild and gets to know people better.

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DIVISION Offensive Magic
CLASS PROGRESSION Macabre Drafter > Baneful Masquerader > Vizard Bearer

Macabre Drafter.
Skilled with the fan Breine can confidently handle the fans so that he directs the air flow hard enough to hurt the foe not just wafting them with a cool breeze. At this stage the force of the attack is around that of a hard slap and likewise leaves red sore marks. Briene can only use one mask at this stage and fickely disregards it because, apparently, green is not his colour.
Melee ( 0 ) Ranged ( 1 ) Magic ( 4 )

Baneful Masquerader.
Breine's skills with the fan have increased a lot and have the force of a hard punch and can knock the wind out of foes. Breine has a total of two masks at this stage and rather likes the gale mask as it's colour and patterning suits his style, or at least more than the current mask.
Melee ( 0 ) Ranged ( 3 ) Magic ( 7 )

Vizard Bearer.
The strongest form of Breine's job, as a vizard bearer he now understands the use of the masks to their full extent and can also use his fans very well and if a foe were to receive a direct hit bones could be broken. He does not like the Tornado mask at all as it, and it's effects on him while he wears it, are savage and make him seem "like a barbaric fool".
Melee ( 0 ) Ranged ( 4 ) Magic ( 11 )

SPECIAL SKILLS

01.
Current Mask.
Charge Type.
Wearing the current mask, a green eye mask patterned with interlocking triangles, Breine is able to see wind currents and thermals as long bands of fluttering ribbons. After spending a little time to study the wind currents in the battle ground Breine can locate a strong current and redirect it so his next attack does more damage to the foe.
+3, +6, +9

02.
Gale Mask.
Target Multiple Foes Type.
Donning the Gale Mask, an electric blue half face mask with golden swirls on it, Breine focuses magic to both of his fans then with a massive sweep he unleashes a gale of savage winds that hit all the foes around him, however as the wind is less focused it does less damage.
20d + magic -2 penalty for every enemy targeted.

03.
Tornado Mask.
Shift Form Type.
Upon putting on the mask of anger, a Japanese style mask with a roaring monstrous face on it, Breine's appearance and stats greatly change. Instead of being the flighty long range fighter Breine becomes a savage berserker type charging forwards into the frey without a fear in the world. In this form Breine gains heavy protective armour and fights by clubbing foes with his closed fans.
Can only attack.
Melee ( 4, 9, 12 ) Ranged ( 0, 0, 2 ) Magic ( 1, 1, 1 )
+3, +6, +9 HP
-1, -2, -3 Evade

Magic Resistance.
Racial Skill Type.
d20+magic/other damage received is reduced by -2/-4/-6 at levels 1, 2, & 3.

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WEAPON Magically enhanced fans that when used correctly can emit savage gusts of air that can cut almost as well as a blade.
LEVEL One
POINT ASSIGNMENT Melee ( 0 ), Ranged ( 1 ), Magic/Other ( 4 )
HIT POINTS 35 >> 40 >> 50
EVADE 14 >> 18 >> 23
OTHER NOTES
I chose to follow the ranged Hp and Evade set as I think it suits his style of attacking and defending, quick with moderate damage dealing, rather than the Magic set that seems to follow the hit 'em hard with magic and hope they don't survive long enough to attack you strategy.

Wish list

Skill:
Tempest Mask
Charge Type (Edited)
Breine once the mask is put on goes into a type of trance. Hovering in the air held aloft by currents of wind. He remains in this state for 2 rounds and on the third round he sacrifices 20% of his health to attack with a massive gust of wind that ignores targets evade and deals extra damage, +2, +4, +8.

I really like the idea of masks and shift form, though we messed you up with the most recent battle system update. ;_; (Changes listed here.)

UHM. Hmmmm. He's using fans to create wind bursts and the wind seems to be the meat of the attack. I think you could get away with saying that he's using the fans to boost wind magics and therefore be able to dump points into magic/other rather than ranged without hurting his attack potential. That's entirely up to you, but I think you could easily justify calling what he does an offensive magic thing. 3nodding

Just a couple quick things I am noticing:

We took away the +1 magic for Duszek, but instead they get an inherent resistance to magical attacks.

Stats max at 12, so a 14 melee isn't possible unless there's stat buffing or pet equipping going on.

Sorry, this is just a really quick breeze through. ._.

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Heya Plat! Everything still looks pretty good but there's one thing I had to address: when I said that Duszek would have darker skin if they weren't out in the sun, I meant they would have to be living in not-the-desert. A Duszek native to the The Great Oasis would undoubtedly have the normal skin tone - even Sisel, who has spent most of her time in doors, has incredibly light skin. In order to have a skin tone that was notably darker than the complexions of other Duszek, that person probably would have to have come from outside of Furud - possibly up north.

Like I said, the Duszek don't really "burn" and they don't really "tan". If you want to play up his attention to his appearance, I suggest maybe saying that he's frequently concerned about his skin drying out and moisturizes often, or possibly saying that his skin is ever so slightly darker than the normal Duszek, but just hiding out indoors frequently isn't going to make that big of a difference.

Sorry I kind of babbled about that. sweatdrop