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Yuki-PUNK

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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 10:15 pm

This is written from a guys point of view... I just made this during the first five minutes of class... I was supposed to be doing something school related, but who the hell does that in free time?

My Beloved

My beloved
Please be okay
Laugh, smile, be happy
Don't cry anymore

Our love's forbidden
We can't do this anymore
I have to leave
I don't want to hurt you anymore

My beloved
I know my words can't reach you
But I promise
I'll be reincarnated
I'll come back to you
We'll be together again

Right now
My beloved
I must go
When the time comes
You'll forget about me
But I'll find you
My love will find you

My beloved
I love you
I'll miss you
But mybeloved
Please don't wait for me

Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 10:23 pm

"Our love's forbidden." Because my mom doesn't want me to be a bakla! xd Just kidding. Love it!

Kage-sama-dono

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Yuki-PUNK

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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 10:46 pm

Kage-sama-dono

"Our love's forbidden." Because my mom doesn't want me to be a bakla! xd Just kidding. Love it!

This poem is actually for you and Hyuk-Soo... He had to leave you for a while until he finishes up some business... Hehehehehe...

Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 11:00 pm

Yuki-PUNK

Kage-sama-dono

"Our love's forbidden." Because my mom doesn't want me to be a bakla! xd Just kidding. Love it!

This poem is actually for you and Hyuk-Soo... He had to leave you for a while until he finishes up some business... Hehehehehe...

Hmm.... I'm going to try Ayane's point of view I guess.

Kage-sama-dono

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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 4:17 pm

Good Job!

Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 9:18 pm

that was pretty, not your very best but still pretty good.

Chaton de Sang

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Yuki-PUNK

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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 1:02 am

frankenkitty666

that was pretty, not your very best but still pretty good.

xp Yeah did too much of that "My beloved" thing... sweatdrop Then it was scary how I made the guy sound so cliche... scream He sounds like a sissy!!! biggrin But thank you so much for the compliment! xd Me so happy thankies!!! Me luv ya!!! heart heart heart

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