this was a sci-fi RP i posted outside the guild a while ago... it was ok for a while but soon folded... i guess the idea was good, but not good enough... below is the first post... how can i make it better?


seiglegar

Story

In the year 2010 the first space colonies were built and populated, they flourished for many years free of the wars on the earth below, until the year 2068. In this dark year, the wars the colonies were built to escape were over, and a new war began. The great orbital war was brief but bloody, and eventually the colonies fell, many now sit empty in decaying orbits, others serve as trade posts, training grounds, even bases of operation. in the year 2089 things only got worse, the tenuous piece that had lasted more than 20 years was broken, no one knows which of the global powers founded the empire, but everyone knows that they were well prepared, and took control before the other powers could even rally a defense.

The year is now 2099, the wings of hope is the largest rebel faction ever formed, based out of one of the abandoned colonies we represent hope and liberation to the people of earth, and this is our story.

Rules
1. Send me character notes via PM, titled "a feather in the wing"
2. Anything goes violence, romance etc but keep to the TOS

Character notes
Gaia name:
Character name:
Role:
Appearance:
How they came to be in the resistance:
Any other Notes: