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The Crimson Moogle

PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 6:21 pm


I just figured we could use a short story or a poetry section. The behind a mask thing is really a code way of saying whats going on to that person. So i supose I'll start it off. Torn to a truth: One, it's me and I'm not with you

I stare at the sky wishing I knew,

What did I do wrong to make you say no

I got down on my knees, but my heart you did throw

Threw it away my dreams kept inside

I dreamt I would make you feel lite as if you could glide

But now I'm alone and left in the gutter

The feeling is gone, butterflies do not flutter

I see people together and I wonder what now

I'd get back in the game but just don't know how

I like other people but the're not my fate

I might of just asked but now it's too late

I love you truely, whenever your near

My heart wells up deeply as my eyes fill with tears

You are my fortress, my castle in sky

But now I will leave you with tears in my eyes
PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 11:49 am


i guess i will post some of my favorite poems on here, although i don't let people see them often lol..

ansatsu-sha
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ansatsu-sha
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 11:52 am


Dreams


The thought of life without you,
Keeps me awake at night.

I don’t ever want to loose you,
The thought of it is frightening.

In my dreams we take,
Long walks on the beach.

Each wave of the tide,
Bringing water to our feet.

Until we stop and we talk,
About our lives in the past week.

Then along comes an everlasting silence,
As I look into your eyes.

And as I lean over to give you a kiss,
It all fades away like a calm blowing mist.

And as I open my eyes the beach is gone.
And the calm running water is gone.
And you are gone.

All that is left is my room,
And so I wish to sleep again,
And so I wish to dream again.

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i like this poem because although that is how i was feeling at the time, it really works for alot of things and people.
PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 11:46 pm


crying they're so pretty, i love them heart keep up the good work =^__^=

Boss_Ozawah


ansatsu-sha
Captain

PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 8:28 pm


thanks XD
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