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Yuki-PUNK

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 10:01 pm


I did this in five minutes when I got bored...

Pretty Finger

Angels that flies
Wings spread widely across the moonlight
I’m slowly slipping
My grip is growing weaker
I can no longer hold on to you

Don’t let me fall
Come to me
Rush down from the heavens
With your arms wide open
Catch my frozen body

Embrace each other underneath these heavens
Your voice shouts
Reaching out to my broken heart
Hold me tighter
Hold me closer

Fall in love underneath these heavens
My emotion will reach out to you
Because I know
In the end
Your finger will strike the last blow to forever shatter my heart

Thanks for readin my mediocre poem, I shall forver be thankful! Please tell me what you think!
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 10:25 am


I really liked it.

Young T PHX 602


Kage-sama-dono

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 5:24 pm


My love! Tis not mediocre, it's wonderful! Ohh, ohh! I sorta helped!
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