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Admiral Veil
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 10:22 pm


Yes, as I am a Self Proclaimed Artist, I am a writer. May not be a good poet with terrible brilliance, but my rhymes fill your soul with such individual thoughts.

So....looks at my poetry Mwaahah. ha. wink

You know Edgar Allen Poe? Yeah. He's my influence in the Underground Poet's Society. Along with gemini's I've found myself to have Two Very Different sub-conciouses.

The Lighter Optomistic Side above planet earth when I'm happy, and the other well...

If you know some about Elemental Witch's you know that the Air Witch is the master of their Realm. Like the Keymaster outside the gate, or the relative Noble soul residing inside the gates.
Did you know that the Air Witch shadows Death and Destruction most of all?
Well that side is at the "Gates of Death." And I've kindof...opened it one night to see if it worked.
You know, to get in touch with my other side, to become apart of my "Own Realm".

This was a time ago, and now the magick has subsided down to earth. Though I do think the gates are still open for some reason.

I tried to conjure up my own magick one night, to see if I could do Magick on my own. It was a simple thing to do, but if you do know an air witch, we do so many Taboos in the Wiccan World. Like blowing out the candles...and etc.

So I did Fire Magick that night...that was Taboo. O:
Dislike me now white witches? Nah, you wouldn't hate me.

Around Midnight I set up 1 pillar candle and two smaller white candles each at height intervals on my vanity.
I also Has a Ceramic black bowl and one piece of paper that I wrote and incantation on.

I lit all three candles starting with the hightest to lowest, took the incantation, said it three times and burned it. I blew out two candles and looked in the mirror facing me, scary right? Since it was dark and all. The thinking that I would see something really scary since I'm a scaredy Cat, blew out the third candle and turned on the lights.

Then I put the ashes of the burnt paper in an emerald bag and carried it with me for a week.

I will never ever reveal that incantation Never.

For me to do something like that is Class-A Taboo.
I did not cast a circle for protection, which if done correctly the spirits could have done something Very Nasty
. I mingled in the Gates of my realm that I have not fully learned of yet. As an inexperienced person like me, or for others could have turned out to be a disaster.

And you may not believe me, but then I don't really care If you do now, eh?


PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 10:24 pm


Just to let you know, my favorite lines are in the Second Stanza. "Go cry in agony," are My best thoughts on this subject.

The Agony

You’ve gone too far,
You said to me,
Now that you cut open that scar,
Now set my demons free.

Go cry in agony,
Cut you soul and bleed,
S-Stop this insanity,
You are the only one I need.

I hated you,
That’s what killed me inside,
I wanted you,
And you never died.

I wanted you dead,
Now that I see you on the floor,
Everything you said,
I hate you even more.

Open up your eyes,
You foolish one,
Listen to your cries,
Now go ahead and run.

I hated you,
That’s what killed me inside,
I wanted you,
And you never died.

I never wanted this,
Just like a tragedy,
This blood tastes like our very first kiss,
It makes me ill.

This isn't happening,
Oh god please don't die,
Stop this from bleeding,
My love don't cry.

I hate you,
That’s what kills me inside,
I want you,
And you... just died.

Admiral Veil
Vice Captain


Admiral Veil
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 2:59 pm


This poem pretty much explains itself. So enjoy.

Insane Freedom

Somebody help me,
I want you all to see,
I just wanna be set free,
Oh god, help me.

I wish for a better life,
Up in the sky,
Not one filled with strife,
Help grant me wings to fly.

I wanna go away,
To a better place,
Far away, [F-far away]
From the human race. [H-human race].

I want to be in sky,
With wind beneath my wings,
Oh god, help me fly,
Don’t let me die.

I wish for a better time,
In a place far away,
Fill my love with this rhyme,
For another day.

I wanna go away,
To a better place,
Far away, [F-far away]
From the human race. [H-human race.]

You see god I fear,
The darkness in me,
But why can’t you hear,
My wish to be free?

So somebody help me,
Please seek this one,
Can’t you see,
That the demon’s already won?

I wanna go away, [Take me away]
To a better place,
Far away, [F-far away]
From the human race. [From the human race.]
PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 3:01 pm


This is one of my favorites. If you notice, I use stanzas of four lines. Sometimes I rhyme them, sometimes I don't. This one is more of a song poem, than classical poetry itself. Enjoy.

For now, I've deleted the Song Whispers from this one, if you want to see them, their at my website. razz

Rainy D.[eadly] A.[ddicting] Y.[ou]

I want to know why,
You walked out that door,
Every time you’d cry,
I’d just ask you for more.

You wanted me to leave,
As I sat in the rain,
Thinking why I would grieve…
Over such little pain?

I asked you once and twice, [E-even Thrice]
You said go away,
And rolled the dice,
Back that one rainy day.

Now I just want you to know,
You lost that throw,
I now just want to show,
How I sunk so low.

That day you said goodbye,
I fell deeper in my whole,
The day I wanted to die,
That day I sold my soul.

I asked you once and twice, [E-even Thrice]
The darkness closing around me,
You rolled the dice,
Hell enveloping within thee.

You’re voice is my haunting,
It can’t go away,
Was that what you’re wanting,
Back on that rainy day?

You wanted me to go,
So I left your life,
But you’ll never know,
What caused this strife.

I asked you once and twice, [E-even Thrice]
You said stay away,
You rolled the dice,
Back on that rainy day.

[That...rainy....d.a.y.]

Admiral Veil
Vice Captain


Admiral Veil
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2007 7:24 pm


Just watch my last....Horror Show.

Horror S.H.O.W.

So are you still waiting,
For this love to go,
Why don’t you stop hating,
And watch this horror show.

You see the ending,
And go away,
You wish for me to die,
Just like each and every day.

Open your eyes,
I can see through this disguise,
Now you want me to see,
That you hate me.

So are you still waiting,
For this one to go,
Now I want you to stay,
And watch this horror show.

I wish you would love me,
The demon wants me so,
But now I can see,
That you already know.

The ending has come,
From the start of today,
Now you have won,
I’ll just go away.

So are you still waiting,
Please I don’t want you to go,
Stop this evil from creating,
And watch this last horror show.

Seize this day,
I just want you to know,
Don’t go away,
From this one last horror show.
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