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 Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 8:28 pm
Right, I'm posting poetry...And sttarting with two about Faeries! (Leave if you don't like sad poetry, just a warning)
-Flightless-
The soft twilight hours fade.
Harsh darkness prevails.
She spreads her wings, tries to fly.
But once again she fails.
Cold water rushes through her hair.
Her wings wrap 'round her delicate frame.
Her, she doesn't have a care.
But with the others, she feels shame.
A small head bobs up from the water.
And bright eyes look around.
But she's alone, the others flew off.
And now they can't be found.
-Execution- (I need a better title...)
Under the dark, twilight sky,
It was Illusien's turn to die.
The jury had made their final decree,
On the solemn eve of July 23.
She had committed the worst crime,
She had sung for the for the moon in the sun's time.
There was a delicate balance of dark and light,
Which had to be maintained just right.
And she gave her words to the Night Sun,
When she was assigned to be a light one.
But the dark fairy, she rebelled,
And the moon was the one for which the spelled.*
Her magic had become very gray,
She had the mind for night, but the blood for day.
And so, the scales were set,
Then balanced when their needs were met.
A quick jolt of magic, and nothing more,
During the dusk of July 24.
*Reffering to magic, not spelling-bee spelling.
I have a metric boatload more, but for now, I'll only post one, because everyone's eyes have already probably bled out. It's actually not a sad peom though....and it doesn't rhyme....or have something happening in it.....
-Because-
Because.
Because I can.
Because I care.
Because.
Because I may.
Because I love.
Because.
Because there's no reason.
Because it's everything.
Because.
Because the sun rose this morning.
Because night fell last night.
Because.
Because I want to.
Because I have to.
Because.
Because I can.
Because of you.
Because.
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 5:37 pm
Nice writing style. ^^ I like your poems, especially "Flightless". It has a certain feeling to it.
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 5:55 pm
Wow. I really liked those. I admire your style of writing. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 6:51 pm
Thanks. ^.^ I'll post a couple more, since I haven't been accused of killing anyone with my poetry yet.
-Under the Sky of Broken Dreams-
Misty light falls through the canopy,
Strange calls come from animals you can't see.
You wander through this forest blind,
So feel free to take your time.
The clouds overhead are black,
Made of broken dreams.
Here in this forest of shattered glass,
Nothing is as it seems.
Darkness lies like a veil,
Not even the mighty will prevail.
The brave turn into cowards here,
Where thoughts are spiderwebs of fear.
You're no different than the rest,
Who say they'll live, they'll pass the test.
But do you dare come play with me,
Under the sky of broken dreams?
-Fate-
On a dark summer's eve,
By the sea.
You saw a stange creature,
What could it be?
You crept forward a little,
Curious and naive.
Silly human, I thought you knew better,
Than to play with me.
The waves rushed down,
They took you under.
With a roaring cry,
And a clap of thunder.
You swim, try to surface,
Too late.
I am the Sea,
The Goddess of fate.
-Thoughts-
Thoughts
There are thoughts of thinking
Thoughts of death on a boat slowly sinking
Thoughts of love
Thoughts of the sky above
Thoughts of all the things wrong with the world
And beautiful thoughts that will never be heard
Thoughs of darkness, thoughts of light
Thoughts of debating wrong and right
Thoughts of life
Thoughts of strife
Thoughts of gray
Thoughts of new thngs here to stay
Thoughts of not thinking
Thoughts of life on a boat slowly sinking
And ever thought inbetween.
I'm mostly just posting the best of my work, new and old, at the moment.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:44 am
I love the themes of your poems. They're really good ideas and with a great writing style to make them even better.
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 3:26 pm
You have a lovely writing style, and a gift with rhyme. I look forward to more.
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