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 Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:24 pm
A boy
On a bike
Rolling down hills
Sailing on pavement
A little boy
Brother
Runs behind
Panting
“Slow down!”
“No”
“I can’t keep up!”
“So? Run faster”
“I can’t!”
Stop and think for a while
Are you on the bike?
Or are you following?
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 1:12 am
If anythin, I'm sorry to say that this is more of a story than a poem... You should make a story out of it, I kinda like the story line! Good job, though!
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:37 pm
Yea I agree it is more of a short story than a poem but I like the story u shood rite a hole story about it
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