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Music101Nazi

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 9:22 am


Her mom--a filthy unpaid whore
sat in front, cring at the door,
longing for her lover no more.

Each one was exactly the same,
in his arms the moment he came,
sometimes without knowinghis name.
Until one day a child shoe bore.

Life with her-- a bottomless hole,
with her she could not take a stroll,
without men scanning her torso.
Her life's been laid-- a path to a whore.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 12:16 pm


That was really good.

Young T PHX 602


Yuki-PUNK

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 4:10 pm


That was awkward... This poem has no meaning probably cuz this has no point... Why did you do this poem in the first place?
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 12:21 am


A) the poem did have a meaning...basically that whether we like it or not our parents do make us who they are

b) I worte this poem for a school assignment...we were just supposed to write a poem about whatever we want in this Spanish form......

Music101Nazi


Leeyuh pet

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 1:38 pm


I dont see where you say our parents make us who we are... I personally dont see it either
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