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The_lostsoul

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 3:21 pm


Well, I love to write poetry... Even though I am not very good at it. I have wrote poetry since I was about... ten meaning I have been writing poetry for four years now. Oh, all of these I wrote and they are very personal.


Feeling for You

Its our life,
Lets take hold.

My emotions run on high
As I dream of you all the time.
I wish to go
Everywhere you go.
When I go to sleep at night,
I want you by my side.
As morning light creeps open my eyes,
I want you to be my first sight.

The love that overwhelms me
Is just for you.
My heart
I have opened up to you.

Its our life,
What choices are to arise?
Towards the future we shall walk
With each other at our side.

My love for you
Is an eternity worth of time
While my mind revolves around our life.


Bitter Sweet November

Sweet November
Holds bitter memories
Of the times
When I had you.

The dark, lonely nights,
I lay amongst my dark, demented mind
To reminisce of
All those cold nights
That you would always be there
To help me through everything.

There was those nights
When I had no worries
For I knew that I had you
To fight back the monster’s
Who haunted my dreams
And if ever I was
Cold or lonely
You’d come
To keep me secure
With your arms wrapped around me.

But now I lay
Through these days
Waiting for those Sweet November days
To reawaken
And come back to me.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 6:15 pm


I liked the first one the best. Your a really good poet.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:47 pm


I really liked both of them. 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 9:21 pm


Liar! You're good at poetry! I'm the bad writer! You have a unique style in your poem! Good job! I really like the Bitter Sweet November poem heart ! I made somethin similar to it, but the seting is more like in the winter December time sweatdrop ... Good job biggrin !

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