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 Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 6:29 am
Never have I seen you
A day before
But as the days go by
I love you more and more
As I dream of my fingers
Running through your hair
I wish more and more
That I could be there
To hold you so closely
Wrapped in my arms
To let you know
You're safe from all harm
I want to love you
Like no other
To touch your face
Light like a feather
To kiss you gently
On your forehead
Just to snuggle
As we lay in bed
I have so many things
That I want to do
That keep me longing
For the day I'll meet you.
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 6:06 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 6:47 pm
Maybe work on the rhyme a bit, but other wise I really liked it. It was really good. heart heart
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 12:15 am
Wow... That's interestin... So you're talkin about this guy you never met before and how you want to hold them so closely to you forver.. That's a new view... You'll be a good story writer! You should try writing a whole story based on that poem!
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