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White_Wolf_Seru

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 10:40 am


I go walking down a sun lit trail
Wondering about how my life will be like
I contemplate the thoughts
That rush through my mind
Tucking my brown silky hair behind my ear
and sigh to only ask myself
"Who or what have you become?"
I think back on my past
and find only disappointment
I look foward and find fear growing within me
I look up at the sky and ask
"Who am I?"
People say all around me
"Your so beautiful, your so smart!"
but is that really how they feel?
something inside keeps saying
"who are you? who are you?"
I lose myself to the world and all its criticizm
I need to gain myself once more
but I ask myself again
"is that possible?"
Maybe I will never know...
You tell me...
what do you think of me?
PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 2:21 pm


I feel the same way... You're view of it was really good and your message was also good. Good job!

Yuki-PUNK


White_Wolf_Seru

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 4:49 pm


Yuki-PUNK
I feel the same way... You're view of it was really good and your message was also good. Good job!
thank you ^_^
PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 4:22 am


Gah! I had the same title but if you compare our poems, yours is better

Kage-sama-dono


Leeyuh pet

PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 4:00 pm


It was good
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