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 Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 8:12 pm
So.... Yeah. I don't do stuff like this often, but the idea got stuck in my head and I had this tune going in my head so I wrote it down. It's really sad though. And long. It's over 3 pages! It's supposed to be a song, not a poem, which is why it's so fragmented. And sorry I can't tell you what music it goes to. It's all in my head.
They met
One day
They fell in love
Passion
Romance
They had it all
He left
To go
Across the sea
To fight
A war
That was not his
He fought
For his life
He fought
For his country
He fought
For his freedom
And his right
to be a man
She waited
On the shore
Where they said
Goodbye
She wept
And she cried
“Oh God, why mine?”
She feared for his life
She made a plan
Reckless
Unsafe
She did it anyway
She cut
Her hair
She dressed
As a man
She left
That shore
Do do as she planed
She joined
She trained
In his infantry
They fought many fights
Side by side
But he never found
Who was under her disguise
And then
A battle
For freedom
And an end
They charged
That shore
Determined to win
Many died
Upon that beach
Far from home
The enemy
Fought for this
last outpost
She fell
Her heart
Had broken in two
She lay
On that shore
She died there too
The battle
Was over
They won
It is true
A shadow
Fell over
A body
On the sand
He knelt
He turned
Her over and saw
The face
Of his love
He had left
On a different shore
A cry
Fell from
His lips
As he held her
He rocked
And he wept
And he didn’t
Undersand her
“What
Oh what
Are you doing here?”
He asked
Her silent face
A shot
Rang out
One foe
Still lived
He killed
He broke
One shot
Did him in
He gasped
He fell
Blood ran
Blood spilled
The hole
In his heart
Was crimson red
He reached
Across
The open space
He felt
For her hand
He took it in his
“I’ll be with you soon
Don’t be afraid”
His last words
Died on his lips
They met
Again
At heaven’s gates
She ran
To him
He held her close
Together
At last
In the end
The fight was over
They did not win
They looked
Into
Each other’s eyes
“I love you”
“I love you”
“I always have”
The gates
They opened
They walked inside
And the lovers
Those two lovers
Were no more
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Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 4:42 pm
And this just suddenly came to you? Wish I'd get that kind of inspiration.
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:14 am
Mr.Ownage And this just suddenly came to you? Wish I'd get that kind of inspiration. Erm... Yeah. In the shower. That's where all my best inspiration comes from. I just usually don't bother to write it down.
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 6:30 pm
Hydra-Star Mr.Ownage And this just suddenly came to you? Wish I'd get that kind of inspiration. Erm... Yeah. In the shower. That's where all my best inspiration comes from. I just usually don't bother to write it down. Crazy. I need inspiration because I want to write another song but don't have any ideas for lyrics.
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 8:32 pm
Mr.Ownage Hydra-Star Mr.Ownage And this just suddenly came to you? Wish I'd get that kind of inspiration. Erm... Yeah. In the shower. That's where all my best inspiration comes from. I just usually don't bother to write it down. Crazy. I need inspiration because I want to write another song but don't have any ideas for lyrics. That sucks. I've got no end of lyrics. They just usually suck and don't fit together anywhere but my mind. XD
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Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 3:57 pm
Hydra-Star Mr.Ownage Hydra-Star Mr.Ownage And this just suddenly came to you? Wish I'd get that kind of inspiration. Erm... Yeah. In the shower. That's where all my best inspiration comes from. I just usually don't bother to write it down. Crazy. I need inspiration because I want to write another song but don't have any ideas for lyrics. That sucks. I've got no end of lyrics. They just usually suck and don't fit together anywhere but my mind. XD So neither of us is in a great song writing position. I'm uninspired and your inspiration doesn't work out like you'd hoped.
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 11:14 am
Mr.Ownage Hydra-Star Mr.Ownage Hydra-Star Mr.Ownage And this just suddenly came to you? Wish I'd get that kind of inspiration. Erm... Yeah. In the shower. That's where all my best inspiration comes from. I just usually don't bother to write it down. Crazy. I need inspiration because I want to write another song but don't have any ideas for lyrics. That sucks. I've got no end of lyrics. They just usually suck and don't fit together anywhere but my mind. XD So neither of us is in a great song writing position. I'm uninspired and your inspiration doesn't work out like you'd hoped. Precisely. We've got opposite problems. Funny how that works.
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 2:07 am
It's so sad.... if there was a music with it, I'm sure I'll cry. Or maybe shed a little tear... Nice one, Hydra!
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