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 Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 5:36 pm
Username: Su Manana
Prefered Genres: Sci-fi, Fantasy (Medival/Modern), Band, Dead Like Me, Lord of the Flies
Limits/ Won't Do: Yaoi/Yuri, Most Animes, Cartoons, Reality
Online: Every three days at least, usually every other day
Other/Notes: I don't do novel-length posts, but considering I usually post in small (size 9) type, I do pretty decent length. I only do group roleplays, but I'd be willing to try one x one. Convince me.
Roleplay Sample: (let me know if you want a link instead)
As usual, it was dark. A dusty, round form feebly rolled over a small hill of noodles. Murray Green shivered in the still, dead, ramen-smelling air. He'd had a premonition about an hour ago, a premonition of doom. None of the other peas listened, but he knew different. 'We'll see who's laughing when the imminent disaster arrives.'
Murray was grim. Hadn't he correctly predicted the last earthquake? This one would be no different.
And he was right. The earthquake arrived, viscious as ever, though shorter than the others. Then, blinding light! Murray couldn't see the light, but he sure as hell felt the boiling, horrible, wet heat that engulfed his world, slowly cooking the inhabitants.
--~--
"Chris! I swear, I heard a scream when I poured the water into my cup noodles!"
"Ah, don't be silly Jenny."
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 7:28 pm
hat role-play makes me laugh myself silly...Chris, listen to the little girl...or big girl, you didn;t specify...
Content: 3.5(it was descriptive, but I've seen better)
Spelling: 2 (no comment)
Grammar/Punctuation: 1.5 (no comment)
Structure: 1.5 (quite good...me likie)
Total: 7
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 8:15 pm
*giggles* thats cute >w<
Content: 2
Spelling: 1.5
Grammer/Punc.: 1.5
Structure: 1
Total: 6
Descriptive but has much room for improvement. The structure was a little awkward as well. But otherwise it was pretty good.
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