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childangel

PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:21 pm


HIHI, i thought i would add a poem seem most of the other poele did, plz comment sweatdrop and advice to make them even better would be great thanx whee biggrin




Sleeping


Looking at what should have been done
Watching at what it should be
Wondering in a transparent sleep
Waiting for the answer
Searching for the clues
But none are found
Laying and sleeping
Sleeping for aimless nights
What else is there to do?
Waiting for the answer
As I sleep
I try to open my eyes
But they are glued shut
No matter how hard I try
Nothing can stop
I recharged the battery over &over
But they aren’t used
As I wonder around
In a transparent sleep






PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 8:50 pm


I thought it was really good. whee 3nodding whee

Young T PHX 602


childangel

PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:55 pm


thanx whee biggrin
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