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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 5:34 pm
does anyone hear a story i made im still working on it but i can tell u the 1st chapter.
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 7:45 pm
I would! sorry I didn't post sooner! Gaia logged me off for some reason neutral
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 4:40 pm
ok well actually me and my friend have been doing this one.
Its starts off with a girl named miasaki as she is going to school she runs in to a new guy going to her school. Ryuko. they walked to school together. and so for the past mounth they would hang out constantly and she started to fall in love with him. and so did him. so when he thought it was safe he told her what her true destiny was. she was ment to safe the haven. other words nown as crucet haven. for her to do this she would have to learn to use her powers to beat hikaku, the evil one trying to kill her.
On the start to the new world they take Ewako with them. they are going up to the moutain to get the sword that only miasaki can use the sword of the skies, by holding it to her head and asking it a question she can see anything. and the first person they run in to is suichi an evil girl sent by hikaku. as soon as she goes to attack them Misu comes and nearly killed her with the swipe of her sword.
I'll post some later but there some of it.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:12 pm
miasaki ok well actually me and my friend have been doing this one. Its starts off with a girl named miasaki as she is going to school she runs in to a new guy going to her school. Ryuko. they walked to school together. and so for the past mounth they would hang out constantly and she started to fall in love with him. and so did him. so when he thought it was safe he told her what her true destiny was. she was ment to safe the haven. other words nown as crucet haven. for her to do this she would have to learn to use her powers to beat hikaku, the evil one trying to kill her.
On the start to the new world they take Ewako with them. they are going up to the moutain to get the sword that only miasaki can use the sword of the skies, by holding it to her head and asking it a question she can see anything. and the first person they run in to is suichi an evil girl sent by hikaku. as soon as she goes to attack them Misu comes and nearly killed her with the swipe of her sword.
I'll post some later but there some of it. Great! It sounds awesome! I have one....but me and my ex were making it then we broke up sweatdrop But I'm ready to keep going cool Nothings going to stop me from trying to get into a school for artists cool
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 8:29 pm
cool keep trying oh sorry about u and your ex sad
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 8:13 am
Its alright....she had it coming xD
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 4:53 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:17 pm
i'll be posting some more soon, ok just not right now.
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 4:22 am
Post when you get the time...
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 8:10 pm
ok well i have been working on my story and my sister (best friend) has helped me some with it, and i have made a few changes mostly to the title which is now Bluerae Haven. so soon peps ok. sorry about the delay.
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