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Young T PHX 602

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 5:55 pm


Kill
As the light starts to fade and the day gets dark.
I feel like I’m in an ally and I begin to hear dogs’ bark.
I see you on the floor.
You look a little sore.
As you lie down in front of me,
I see you have a gun shot in your heart and knee.
You tell me your friends were in a gang,
You say you didn’t find out till you went somewhere with them and heard a loud bang.
They left you all alone lying here,
They saw you hurt and yet you couldn’t see in there eyes one tear.
Then again, maybe they left because of there fear.
Thanks to them I’m left alone,
Now I have no one I can call my own.
Did they have a good reason,
To give you so much treason.
What kind of guy,
Would leave you here to die.
I’m sorry but I can’t come to your funeral,
Because I will have blood on my hands after I kill.
Kill the guy who did this,
Kill him for making me and you have our last kiss.
But don’t worry sooner or later I’ll die to,
Then once again I shall be with you.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 11:41 am


i like it!!!

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Young T PHX 602

PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 5:59 pm


Thank you
PostPosted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 12:15 pm


wow that is really good
dont think i saw any thing better

topher666


Young T PHX 602

PostPosted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 7:38 pm


topher666
wow that is really good
dont think i saw any thing better

Thank you heart heart heart
PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:10 pm


You must really like this guy... You're ready to kill someone for him... That's true love I guess! Good job!

Yuki-PUNK


Young T PHX 602

PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:23 pm


Yuki-PUNK
You must really like this guy... You're ready to kill someone for him... That's true love I guess! Good job!
Yea but i just thought of it i dont
PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 12:27 pm


Nice poem I liked it...

Leeyuh pet


childangel

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 3:43 pm


nicely done, i like it alot, it's deep 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 4:09 pm


Thank you horny-bi-girl & childangel

Young T PHX 602

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