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 Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:31 am
I know this poem sounds a little ....scarey and sad but I have felt this way since finding out about myself and I just didn't understand what to do or who to tell. Though I'm getting a little better. It's called trapped soul.
Can you feel it?
The soul in its crystal box
Wanting to be let out, wanting to be explained
Trapped in a cage surrounded by darkness.
Can you hear it?
Its screaming, its tortured yelling
As it tries to tell its stroy
To a world that doesn't care.
Can you taste it?
Floating to everyone and everything
That ignores its screams and wantings
But one day,
It will get let out.
To feel freedom
In a world of darkness.
To tell a story to a patient being;
Who cares and understands its pain.
One day it will be free and it will soar.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:32 am
I put it in the wrong section when i first posted this. But i hope you do review it. It's my one... .... and probably only poem.
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 2:01 pm
I don't think it sounds creepy at all. I think it's beautiful, and I can completely understand the idea behind it.>^__^< It brings up this really beautiful image in my mind.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:14 pm
I think everyone feels that way in some form or another. You are not alone in your pain.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:46 pm
awww thanks you guys. that means alot to me.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 11:44 pm
You're very welcome, don't have to thank us for the truth.^__^
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