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 Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 10:32 pm
Lies
Why can’t you see,
That you have to start believing me?
Why can’t this be,
The last time you don’t trust me?
I can’t even sleep at night,
When I know what you’re thinking isn’t right.
You have to really pay attention to what I say,
Or there might be no way,
I can take this from you for another day.
Try to hear me out,
Without making me shout.
I wouldn’t want to go to hell when I die,
So you must understand that I’m not telling you a lie.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 1:33 pm
I like it except the rhyming sounds kinda forced in the beginning. But other then that it's great.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 5:03 pm
stardust_kitty I like it except the rhyming sounds kinda forced in the beginning. But other then that it's great. Thank you
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