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 Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 12:26 pm
It spills
It flows
We all share it
Does it make us the same?
Does it matter?
Can we spill it?
Can we make it flow?
It controls you
It controls life
If we hate it
Why do we see it so often?
Why do we drive the knife in?
To make it flow?
To make it spill?
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:04 pm
I like it...can you read my new poem and pleez tell me what you think of it<3>
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 9:09 pm
I like it but it kinda sounds like you're trying to make it rhyme...If you are then you are trying to hard. If you arn't then it's really good! biggrin
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 11:01 am
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