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 Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 8:29 am
Darkness
Has anyone ever been brought to the stars?
Have you seen the beauty of the blackness?
Never needing to touch the limit bars
Wondering where we all turn up heartless?
The answers are there and we need to show
The life in itself and the dark of night
Maybe if we float with space we will know
Whether our life is wrong, or greatly right
Come, meet me in the blackness of the night
We will dance with the stars of space and life
Let us not be prone to anything or fright
The space where we are will give us much strife
But do not worry because of it; night
Our love will soar to the greatest of heights
I wrote this three years ago for my English class, so it actually uses Shakespeare's iambic pentameter.
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 8:55 am
i like the imagery and all and i like it itself
good job
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 11:51 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 1:01 pm
Wow! It was really good! heart
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:09 pm
very nice, i always liked iambic pentameter.
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