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 Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 11:59 pm
Poetry
the way the rythem flows thru my ears
to the beat of my heart
its like glory filled with cheers
poetry is like the sound of the wind
never bother anybodys except the devil for he sins
the true music of my heart fullfils with glory when it starts
from the words of this poem
you may only love poetry once but there is me who will love it more than twice
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:31 am
I liked it, but the second stanza just doesn't flow right to me. But besides that it was really good.
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 12:30 pm
I think you have some mistakes in the second stanza, but other then that i liked it.
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 6:14 pm
I love how you express poetry but the second stanza doesn't make sense in the poem I think. Just like everyone said..Sorry for being repetative..
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