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 Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 7:39 am
Loved Me Yesterday, Hate Me Now
You loved me yesterday;
hate me now
believe what you say?
that's just not plausible
maybe it was all lies
down to that one phrase
"i'll love you for all time"
what happened to forever?
I guess time's stopped
or another promise--broken
away it was mopped:
our love, like mud on the floor
is that what i am to you
a spot to be cleaned
what am i suppose to do
when i'm wiped from your life?
heartbroken and deserted
the thing pounding in my chest
is entirely subverted
was this your intention?
you left me desicated
but not for long
love in me will be resurected
and i'll go on
you'll be nothing
just a faded memory
i'll forget every linguistic sting
you don't exist here anymore
you've been erased
from my frame of mind
a crash for which you wern't braced
but no one cares
they all want you dead
so here's the bullet
i'll put in your head
"good bye" is all there's left to be said
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 7:47 am
some of you already read this one... so i'll add a few more of my favs.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 7:49 am
yea, i wrote it for him, but he didn't deserve it. Eric's Poem
You're mine to love
Mine to hold
I don't want to lose you
Because our love was sold
To the highest bidder
Of rumors and lies
Please don't believe them
There's deceit in their eyes
I'll love you
Everyday
And I'll miss you
When you've gone away
I'll wait here
Faithful and true
Because no one
Will ever replace you
The jewelry will tarnish
The photos will fade
But I hope that you
Will always stay
And never leave
For if I lost you
I'd never be able to live
Another day through
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:13 am
What's The Point
What's the point in trying
If you're gonna fail anyway
What's the point in waking up
If it's just another day
What's the point in living
If all you have is life
What's the point in lying
About taking another's life
You saved them from all
The betrayal and lies
You saved them from all the things
They've run from all their lives
You saved them from everything
Including the pain
You saved them from everything
When they had nothing to gain
You've done them a favor
They'll never have to see
How life changes or feel
The loss of stability
You took their life
And now they're gone
Then you took yours
And I can't move on
Now that you've left
Who's gonna save me
You stole my heart
Then took away everything
What's the point in loving
When they'll be gone in the end
What's the point in staying
Instead of following this trend
I'm not scared of anything
Except living without you
Because I would fail
In all I do
For when you died you took my reason
To live, wake up, love, and try
So I guess it's my turn
To take my life and die
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:14 am
Desperation
Desperation's
Seeping in
I'm running out of directions
And am far from the end
My hands are covered
In another's blood
I'm running out of lies
To hide what I've done
Where should I go?
The roads are all tangled
And my mind
Is distraught and mangled
Desperation's
Taking hold
Leaving me helpless
And under its controll
It's ravaging me
Destroying who I was
Replacing it with a shadow
Of your expectations
Where should I go?
Is there an escape?
Suicide
It's the only way
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:16 am
i was supposed to be moving. Colors
Crimson sunlight
Reflecting on an endless horizon
Of ocean waves
I will soon be forgotten
A silver heart
Metallic and cold
Never giving way
Losing all it holds
Ebony eyes
Staring into an abyss
Of familar faces
Of people I'll miss
Invisible roads
I'm stumbling upon
An unwanted path
Leading to Oblivion
Picturesque thoughts
Black and white memories
Have I been cast off?
Or do you remember me
The colors arn't quite right
The place never actually home
Just somewhere to bury my emotions
To keep them unknown
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:16 am
ok. that's enough for know. hope you enjoy them.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 2:49 pm
those are really good, i especially like Colors and Desperation. i think you should review some fo your vocabulary in Loved Me Yesterday, Hate Me Today, some of it is a little off. especially the word desicated which means to drain the liquid from something.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:39 pm
These are amazing! I really liked Loved Me Yesterday, Hate Me Now.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:53 pm
I loved them all, but my favorite was What's The Point
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 5:19 am
frankenkitty666 those are really good, i especially like Colors and Desperation. i think you should review some fo your vocabulary in Loved Me Yesterday, Hate Me Today, some of it is a little off. especially the word desicated which means to drain the liquid from something. so my love was dried up/dead. when something's dried up it is usually as good as dead. except fruit.
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